that bit of manu being the helicopter parent is so funny when you consider their lineage to the popoki goddess. if a feline cub is near u, the parent is definitely nearby watching u 😂 what i would give to see an au of manu and mahina living and manu is not so lowkey watching asl when the 4 become friends like a wild cat hiding behind the bushes, he did not let up the 🤨 expression even when hoku gotten older and there are more men than he like for them to be around hoku
Mahina stopped just short of bringing her hammer down onto the slab of metal sitting over her workbench.
A loud rustle from the front of the house caught her attention. The older woman blinked, tilting her head curiously as she set the metal aside and kept the hammer in her grip, twirling it around her fingers out of habit.
Her long white braid swung easily against her back. An ocean breeze tickled the ends, bringing Mahina's gaze outwards to the coast. Her workshop sat right beside their little house on the cliffside hill, looking right out to the ocean before them.
A short, familiar curse reached her ears and she grinned now, slinging the hammer lightly over her shoulder. "You moving the furniture again?"
Manu frowned. He'd been letting his hair grow out a bit this time, silken ends tied off just at the base of his neck with an old ribbon—one of Hoku's, she realized fondly. Their usual patio furniture sat in a cultish huddle around him, rocking chairs gazing back as Manu crossed his arms over his chest.
"Do you think they looked better where they used to be or how I had them yesterday?"
Mahina tipped her head to the side.
"How did they look yesterday again?"
Manu sighed, shaking his head. Mahina grinned cheekily, almost skipping over to her dearest friend as she came up to the steps of their home. "Are you going through your mid-life crisis now? Hoku won't mind them either way, you know."
Manu scowled, looking at her like a cat caught getting wet. Mahina laughed, coming over to help him move the chairs back into place as she set the hammer down. "What made you think she'd care if you moved them?"
"At first I wanted to move them to do something different," Manu explained slowly, evenly as he carefully polished off each chair and Mahina idly checked the wood for stray splinters. Not a single one to be found, of course, because the two of them were damn good at what they did. "But then I woke up last night—remember when I went down and started painting?"
"Of course I do, you almost gave me a heart attack."
"You? Right, Hina," Mahina laughed and Manu continued, "But then I woke up and realized, what if she's expecting everything to look the same way it did when she left? What if seeing it different will make her sad? Shouldn't I just leave it the way it was then?"
"But it's still the same chair," Mahina said, taking a seat in one of the rockers once it'd been moved. Manu immediately took up a seat beside her. "I don't think she'd mind how you moved it."
"You think?"
"Mmm, she's a funny one, that girl. I don't think she'd mind much at all unless you did something more drastic... like changing the paint or putting it on the roof?"
"Hina, why on earth would I ever—"
The sound of a car engine slowing to stop brought the two of them to a halt. Mahina and Manu froze, blinking in confusion at each other as they immediately shot their feet, rushing over to the pathway leading down their hill.
A car they did not recognize sat at the base of the hill, parked along the grassy edge. Mahina frowned in curiosity while Manu looked thoughtful, glancing to his watch. "Hoku's supposed to get picked up from the airport tomorrow—"
Both of them stopped as a familiar face appeared at the base of the hill, kicking the door to their rental car open. Manu caught a brief glimpse of a smooth hand reaching for her, as though in concern, but she was barreling out of the car before they could touch.
It was a face Mahina and Manu would know, in their dreams, every waking moment, and up to their last breath.
A happiness Manu had once never known and now could not fathom otherwise flooded his chest. Mahina's eyes sparkled, bright with mirth and love and the two of them began making their way down the hill as their daughter rushed to meet them.
"Mama! Papa!"
"Maka!"
Hoku's arms wrapped around her parents. Manu and Mahina embraced her in an instant, completing their circle of three. Snow white hair mingled with each other, a sense of perfect peace settling for a moment in unison as Manu shut his eyes, breathing in the familiar scent of their daughter, carding his fingers through her hair. Mahina's hand moved over her back, down the side of her arm—their daughter, theirs.
(Their beautiful baby girl.)
"Maka, it's been too long," Mahina murmured sweetly, eyes full of warmth as she pulled back, only an arm's length away to get a full view of their daughter. "You look good."
"You could afford to eat a bit more," Manu said, briefly pinching Hoku's arm to test for her weight. Hoku laughed, rocking back on her heels and almost taking her parents with her. "You're early! Why did you come without telling us? I would've gotten everything ready and—"
"He's had everything ready for weeks," Mahina said. Manu gaped at her. "He's still getting more ready. I haven't seen the fridge this full since—"
"I haven't heard you complain about it since you've been snacking plenty on the—"
"I wanted to surprise you guys!" Hoku said happily, positively glowing at her parents. Manu and Mahina quieted, hands still rubbing up and down their daughter, mapping the shape of her, how she looked now, her face full of life, content.
(Happy.)
"I always had the flight booked a day early, just wanted to make it a fun trip," Hoku said. She turned over her shoulder, grinning down at the base of the hill. "And well... maybe introduce you to a few new faces?"
Mahina raised a curious brow, slipping her arm through Hoku's as they made their way down the hill. Manu looked skeptical, walking right at their side and absently nudging Hoku away from any dips and rocks.
"HEEEEEYYYY MAMA HOKU!! PAPA HOKU!!!"
Mahina looked amused while Manu snorted in disbelief. Luffy appeared around the other side of the car, almost leaping into the air as he jumped up and down to wave to them. "LONG TIME NO SEE!"
"That boy isn't a new face," Manu said, watching Luffy run around to the trunk now. "I didn't know he was coming. I would've doubled the fridge—"
Mahina noticed the two men stepping out of the car before Manu, her raised brow raising even higher as an amused whistle sat on her lips. She turned now to where Manu had frozen stiff, staring in cold, incredulous silence at the two men standing at the base of their hill.
Two dashing young men stood beside the rental car, watching the three make their way down the hill. Mahina realized who they were in an instant, as she was sure Manu did as well, despite his cool silence. She could hear the judgement in his gaze as he skimmed the more tan one up and down, from his sandaled feet and board shorts to his open chest and unbuttoned shirt. Mahina like the wild way the wind tousled his black hair—this one was Ace.
The more respectable blonde man was Sabo, she realized. He stood instead of leaning against the car like his brother, hands clasped politely in front of him, a small smile already on his lips, but Mahina noticed his eyes never left her daughter, watching and tracking her steps down the hill with practiced ease. A sort of softness.
"I wanted to introduce the two of you!" Hoku said as they drew nearer to the car. "I know I always talk about Ace and Sabs, but you've only ever known them in photos and stuff... so when they mentioned they were able to get some time off work..."
"I think the photos are fine enough," Manu said simply. Hoku laughed and Mahina grinned. Her daughter was sharp, but she wasn't Mahina's sharpest creation in certain aspects, that much she was sure.
"I know it's sudden, and they don't want to bother," Hoku said. "But they've always wanted to meet you guys, they almost beg me to be honest. I thought, eh, might as well, right?"
"They seem fun," Mahina managed.
"That one doesn't know how to button his shirt," Manu said.
Hoku grinned, tugging her parents down the rest of the way. Up close Mahina could see clearly just how handsome these two young men were—fit, chiseled, matching better than the strange, blurred photos her daughter would send from time to time. They both straightened in unison at the sight of Manu and Mahina, rushing forward with outstretched hands.
"Mama, Papa, this is Ace and Sabo!" Hoku introduced proudly, nose somewhat thrusted in the air with a bright grin. "Ace, Sabo—my parents!"
"Hoku's mom and dad it's nice—"
"Miss Mahina, Mister Manu—"
Ace and Sabo stopped, looking at each other with round eyes. Sabo's expression instantly schooled into a cooler one, motioning quickly with his eyes while Ace gaped until his brother blinked, nodding.
"Miss Mahina! Mister Manu!" Ace and Sabo said in unison this time, beaming politely and widely at the two of them. "It's a pleasure and an honor to finally meet you!"
Mahina decided slyly to follow in Manu's steps, glancing sideways as her friend's face became one of quiet politeness—she knew this expression of his like the back of her hand, a frigid sort of coolness beneath its quiet.
"...It's good to meet the both of you as well," Manu said simply. Hoku positively beamed between her mother and father. Ace and Sabo continued to smile, a crooked grin and a polite upturn of lips respectively. Mahina took that as her cue and shook their hands first, both their gazes flying to her.
Mahina watched Ace do a double take, a soft redness coloring the tips of his ears at the sight of her. He bowed especially deep when she took his hand, "Mama—Miss Mahina, thank you for leaving Hoku in our care."
"Well, she's always got some fun stories to tell thanks to you lot," Mahina said slowly, a bit of a tease to her tone. She turned to Sabo next, considering this upstanding looking young man and wondering what little thoughts he kept hidden behind those quiet eyes. "Thank you for looking after our daughter."
"Hoku's very dear to us," Sabo said sincerely. Hoku made a face, looking at him. Dramatic, Mahina heard her think without saying. "She's always speaking so much about the both of you, it's a pleasure to finally—"
"What were your names again?"
Ace and Sabo blinked, looking back at Manu. Hoku didn't even seem the slightest bit bothered, swaying happily on her feet until she noticed Luffy by the trunk. Hoku quickly scampered off, shouting something about not eating the gifts.
"A-Ace," Ace said quickly, offering his hand. Manu considered it for a second longer than most and shook it silently. "Ace, uh, Mister Manu."
"I'm Sabo," Sabo repeated as well, extending his hand. Manu considered it just as long before shaking it briefly. "Thank you again for—"
"That's... polite of you to drop Hoku off," Manu said. He pulled his hand away, facing both Ace and Sabo. "What time is your flight home?"
Ace looked dumbfounded, blinking repeatedly. Sabo looked a bit perplexed, blinking at a slower pace at Manu as his lips parted to respond. Mahina withheld her grin, offering instead and politely curious expression.
Maybe she was being a bit mean, but she didn't get to see Manu like this often—it'd be too fun to tease him later.
"Uh, well," Ace started. A bead of sweat rolled down the side of his brow. "Tuesday... when Hoku leaves..."
"I see, quite some time then," Manu said smoothly. "Where will you two be staying? Somewhere close? We're quite a ways away from the nearest hotel where most have to stay."
"Oh, well," Sabo began gracefully, an easy, polite smile settled over his lips. Mahina understood the situation instantly and had to give it to the young man for recovering as quick as he did. "Yes, we were planning on booking over by—"
Ace looked confused, snapping his head to Sabo. "But we're supposed to be—"
Sabo's heel smacked into Ace's shin, a quick, efficient kick. Mahina did her best not to laugh when his eyes bulged. "Excuse me, we're booking by—"
"I told them they could stay with us!" Hoku called over, appearing over the popped lid of the trunk, her arms wrapped around one of the suitcases while Luffy hauled a box over the top of his head. "There's the spare bedroom in mama's workshop if that's okay?"
Manu quietly tipped his head to the side, considering the new development in silence. Ace shifted unsteadily on his feet, looking quite a bit out of his element while Mahina simply allowed her lips to curl into a grin, lightly touching Manu's elbow. He glanced to her, meeting her gaze for a moment before he looked back at the two men.
"Yes," Manu said, clipped. "I think that'll be fine. Luffy can stay in the guest room in the house."
"Thanks Papa Hoku!" Luffy shouted, racing past them and up the hill toward the house with the box over his head.
"Thank you so much for your generosity," Sabo said quickly, smiling brightly at Manu. His expression remained unchanging and Sabo continued, "We don't mean to impose, we'll make sure we handle everything on our side and—"
"That's fine," Manu said.
Sabo's words fell to a quiet, polite silence. He continued to smile, a bit strained at the corners as he lightly adjusted the cuff of his sleeves.
"Oh, maka!" Mahina called, deciding to throw the two a bone. "Wait, let us help you with that."
Ace and Sabo turned on their heels in an instant. Mahina almost choked on a snort. Hoku looked up from where she was wrestling with one of the suitcases to get the handle up. "It's alright! We brought a ton of souvenirs over! It'll be a few trips."
"Aw, come on, let me get that for ya," Ace said, stepping over to the trunk. Hoku made a face and Mahina watched an easy grin slide across his face, expression suddenly far more confident than it'd been second ago, teasing. "You'll take the entire trip to get it up the hill if we let you."
"You're exaggerating that isn't gonna—"
"You almost broke your nose pulling it off the carousel," Sabo added, easily lifting one of the suitcases up with one hand while Ace grabbed the other. Mahina watched this interaction with curious eyes. Sabo's hand dropped and lightly touched Hoku's lower back, guiding her with practiced fingers to the side of the car. "Could you grab—"
"I can get this for her."
Mahina pressed her fingertips to her lips, hiding her expression. Sabo and Ace looked startled, blinking like deer in headlights as Manu easily took Hoku's bags from the two of them, one in either hand—and promptly began to make his way up the hill to the house. "It's my daughter's things after all."
Ace opened his mouth, closing it abruptly. Sabo looked momentarily stunned, staring after Manu—
"Thanks, Papa!" Hoku said sweetly, running around the side of the car and almost tripping over the lip of the hill. Ace and Sabo's arms shot out, a practiced move to Mahina's gaze, but Hoku easily rightened herself, almost skipping over to Manu's side.
Mahina watched with fond eyes as they shared the weight of the larger suitcase together, Manu turning to Hoku with affection in his gaze.
She glanced back to the two young men looking lost at the base of the hill.
"Don't worry," Mahina offered, almost sang as she took another suitcase from the two of them. Ace and Sabo watched her almost robotically as she hefted it over her shoulder with ease. "I think you two did just fine."
the entirety of this trip is Ace and Sabo trying to win Manu and Mahina over, only to find themselves at the constant mercy of Manu's scrutiny
Manu's never too mean to them, but he sure does make them sweat
Sabo's a bit hurt because he can normally charm most parents and Hoku's won't even give him an inch
Ace starts to think that maybe he did do something wrong, he tries not to show it but starts to freak at the thought of Hoku's parents actually hating him—what the hell is he supposed to do if that happens?
He starts to limit physical contact with Hoku—which is nowhere near normal for him, Ace holds back bear hugs and noogies and chokeholds because he grabbed Hoku, swinging her up and Manu had looked at him as though he'd just thrown up all over his hand-embroidered rug
Even Sabo gets caught, an arm around Hoku's waist when he helps her down the steps to the beach—he respectfully keeps it hovered over Hoku's lower back instead when Manu stares him down from the top of the hill
Manu and Mahina treat Luffy normally, and Luffy does the same to them—they've become acquainted with Luffy and like him quite fine, after all
Hoku's just happy to have a good time with everyone
It's Luffy who gets Manu to act just a liiiiitttttlllleeee bit nicer when he notices Manu and Mahina standing by the hill, watching and talking about Hoku and he says:
"Shishishi, Ace and Sabo can handle it, they're tough!" Luffy promptly spit out a mouthful of watermelon seeds. Manu and Mahina watched them scatter to the ground. "Besides, they know Hoku loves it."
"Loves it?" Manu repeated.
"Sure," Luffy said, unbothered. "You guys havin' a say. I dunno. She's probably just happy she gets to grow up with ya this time."
Manu and Mahina look at each other, expressions soft and full of love for their daughter as Luffy walks off, sandals slapping in the sand. It takes them a moment before Manu suddenly looks a bit confused, glancing to Luffy's swaying straw hat in the wind.
"Did he say this time? What's that supposed to mean?"
"Who knows," Mahina says, looking curious, maybe a bit mystified. "He's always been a curious one, hasn't he?"
Luffy eats the entire watermelon rind in front of them and Hoku's parents decide to just have fun the rest of the weekend
-i decided to do a modern au for this one because an au where mahina and manu live in the memos storyline... :'( they'd probably want to hear all the news possible about their daughter, so an interaction of them scrutinizing all the boys would probably go something like them sitting around the table talking about their wanted posters and making judgements based on that
Hey there, I hope I dont annoyed you with this ask 😅 but in chapter 6 of MEMOS did Hoku saw luffy’s bounty on the newspaper or was it hers? Considering that right after that scene you showed the marine printing petty criminals bounty
If I'm remembering the scene right myself, both were present! It's when Luffy and Zoro see their bounties but Hoku finds out that the marines actually print out wanted posters of "petty criminals" which was the category she had fallen under at the time.
and the ask isn't an annoyance at all, if anything, i hope you're not annoyed it took me five million business years to answer 😭
I was wondering, Hoku already met Law and Kid. But she hasn't met them in "Memoirs of a suicidal pirate" but when you write her on tumblr she has met them, I don't mean to sound rude but I'm confused am I reading wrong?
Hahaha, you're not reading wrong! A lot of the snippets are just what-ifs/AUs that I do for fun with the two of them, kinda also helps me practice their dynamic more
For Kid tho, Hoku has met in Memos :) Law technically I guess, just as kids and for a brief moment
In the chapter hoku gets sick mau says something "my king you should rest" but he usually calls her my star. Is there something goin or did i miss something
tbh i had a few people ask this and it's a slip to enigma on my part (^///^) it's been so long since i wrote cam and Kali and it came out on accident!
yes, hello, are you. are you chill with like… nsfw asks? slightly? i had a question about lhff and a sillier one about general memos but i don’t wanna ask if that makes you uncomfortable-
Ok so we've heard a lot about Mahina, but now I want to know more about Manu.
More about Manu will be revealed in plot line but what I can say for now at least is that:
- He comes from a long line of extremely talented artists on Artopoki, many of which also became illustrators
- He was considered the problem child between himself and his brother
- He had a rebellious phase, he was known for taking long trips away from the island and traveling around the world, he went years without going back sometimes
- Manu was considered one of the prettiest/handsomest for his generation on Artopoki
- He and Mahina have been friends since they were children
- He used to abhor the traditional style of art taught to him and did more unconventional/explorative styles with Pokian ink in his youth, found himself reconciling with tradition and the new when he got older (he drilled the fundamentals into Hoku for the short time they were together)
- He originally didn't want children
- He had a ten-year-plan for Hoku when it came to learning art, but the more time he spent watching his daughter grow, somewhere along the way he decided he wanted to see what kind of stories she would tell on her own
- He pretended not to notice when Hoku skipped art practice to learn from Mahina, they later decided if she wanted to take up crafting they'd find a way to make it work
- Manu did leave quite a string of broken hearts behind across the Grand Line
So what are Artopoki's stance on adopted kids, like are they allowed to have coming of age marks as well, despite not having magic blood or hair? Or are they more strict in only those who have Pokian lineage can have those marks?
Artopoki allowed for adopted children on the rare chances it happened. Children not of Pokian descent adopted by Pokians were granted marks by their parents, it was actually rather customary of some Pokians to give non-Pokians marks out of deep friendship, admiration, love or other reasons. Pokians who fell in love with non-Pokians would even sometimes inscribe their marks onto their lovers (with their consent) on some part of their body as a sort of promise/binding.
Different Pokians sometimes had different stances on this, the more conservative would feel it was disgraceful or tasteless. Others with more open-minded views saw no issue with it as long as the marks were treated with respect. Artopoki, culture loving and open-minded as it was, has its own history of varying beliefs and laws instilled in the island. The last group of elders overseeing the islands governing before Artopoki fell was an even split between more conservative and less.
The people of Artopoki tended to stay within the island with the exception of leaving on excursions, travel, work, etc. However some Pokians longed for more and would settle off island or found themselves places and small communities they liked more, it was also customary for many Pokians to make a sort of pilgrimage away from the island to see the rest of the world and it was up to them whether or not to come back. Manu and Mahina were prime examples of Pokians who had a calling, but honed their life’s work off the island before finding their way back to their goddess call.
