So does the plot line closely follow whatās happened in the original books? Whatās the major differences between your version and books? (Besides the modern aspect, lol)
Oof, okay. This is gonna be hard to explain, mostly because my writing is usually āoutsideā the plot and isnāt a chapter-by-chapter type rewrite or AU, but Iāll do my best.Ā
In short? When talking about the timeline we have in the original IC series, MIC is almost separate from IC after the first half of Book 1. The first major divergence is that Brom lives. Not only is Brom alive, but Glenwing survives the ambush. He loses an arm, but heās very much alive and rejoins Arya with the spellcasters sent to protect Eragon and Saphira.Ā
EDIT: I felt I should add that a lot of the general plot points through Eldest remain the same. Iām still trying to figure out Brisingr and Inheritance though.
But letās back up for a second and zoom way out. Get more general.
Starting at the Fall of the Riders: While Paoliniās official timeline has the Fall lasting about 4 years, with Arya being born a year before the final conflict, Iāve toyed with it a bit so that it lasts maybe 5 to 7ish years. I wanted the effect of the war to carry more weight in a way that is remembered and passed on through the shorter lived races. We donāt get much of grown human grandchildren in IC talking about how their grandparents fought alongside the Riders and elves in an attempt to preserve the Golden Age. Along with that, people alive (Iām talking in their 30s to 60s) in the books would likely have quite vivid memories of the Forsworn and their dragons terrorizing the world. And in truth, I wanted Arya to have some memories and impressions of her father and the differences between him and IslanzadĆ.Ā
Iāve also extended the time that the ābooksā take place over. Paolini has Eragon, Eldest, Brisingr, and Inheritance taking place over a year. Itās honestly ridiculous, and Iām not going to soften that statement at all. So the timeline is extended. I hover around 5 years, but that occasionally feels like it would be longer considering how much slice of life and non-main-plot type writing I do. MIC has never really been about following the plot of IC but more about the effects of the conflict on the characters. Itās stuff we donāt get to see because the focus is usually on Eragon and Saphira and theyāre just so rushed to end the war.Ā
Letās see what else I can think ofā¦. Ah, well, Brom eventually does tell Eragon about being his father. He kinda goes on a rage rant that Murtagh told Eragon he was Morzanās son and grabs Eragon in front of that whole little meeting and tells him ofc Morzan isnāt his dad because āYOUāRE MY SON, DAMN IT!ā and yeah thereās some drama but it works out with a nice hug.Ā
IslanzadĆ doesnāt die in the final conflict, but is humbled in some way. She keeps the throne, and after a year of recovery where the council handles things and Arya helps them reintegrate into greater AlagaĆ«sia society without offending too many people and starting another war. Arya and Firnen join Eragon and Saphira after that.Ā
Speaking of those two Riders...with more time for development, and more time for Eragon to mature and Arya to heal, as well as both of them to properly get to know each other, I do plan on having Eragon and Arya start a relationship. Thereās issues with it still, and I donāt write much about it because itās still iffy at best for me (Iām aromantic and asexual so writing romance is always a little wonky, and I also kin MIC!Arya as somewhat-clueless-to-hints demiromantic/demisexual so thatās always interesting to work withā¦) but I feel the extended timeline could make it more realistic and healthy.Ā
Alright thatās all I have. Itās quite a bit, haha! Iāve mostly written MIC for more prequel type things, as well as kept my writing in the times of the first and second books, so the plot isnāt very well done. Hope you enjoy what I have though! :)
Iāve answered the part of your question about the plot/timeline, but not fully answered your question, really. Besides the āmodernā aspect, thereās SIGNIFICANT changes to characterization and personalities for lots of the characters. If you want more of that kind of explanation, feel free to make another ask (or Iāll just make a reblog extension for this one) and Iāll gladly go over what I have/know of my versions of the characters thus far! They kinda...make themselves sometimes when I write, so characters I havenāt written about often are less developed in MIC than Iād like.