I was today years old when I realized the one who made the yarn slurper art and the creator of one of my fav tfa fic is the same person and boy it is giving me feelings.
Anyways, questions, how do you feel about people still coming to you about Missing Perspective? How do you feel about the work itself, anything you feel proud of or would tweak? It is a fic that still brings me great joy today, but I understand it’s probably been a long time since you finished it for you, so you don’t have to answer the questions at all if you feel kind of over it.
Honestly it's been a while I get the occasional comment and my ass always forgets to go back and reply to them on AO3 so oops if that was one of yours. I knew it was the best ShockBee fic on the market but I didn't think it was that influential on the TFA section of the fandom tbh.
It's a great fic and I am proud of it. Took a LOT of planning and I went the extra mile to please the readers by adding in the multiple endings for everyone when I really didn't have to. I had one ending planned you might be able to tell which one it was.
The main thing I would change going back to it would be the grammar as that's probably the biggest bar to people enjoying the fic. Your boy juni circa 2017 making 76 word long sentences because they don't understand what a clause is.
I'm 30+ ass years old, got a C in English and I still don't understand what a clause is. I don't have as much energy to write as I used to. I feel old, I'm old, I'm a grandma. I envy 27yr Juni they was working minimum wage and living in a single room on a diet of eggs and they delivered more writing in a month than I do in a year now.
Anyway, other things I would change I'd probably add a few extra bonus scenes like DVD extras. Having a proper intro to Sari would be one I kind of just said "she's here now" in chapter 3 didn't I?
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