#moretones

[santa-cachucha]

Me metí al mar y me saqué la chucha Jajskajs pero me encantan los moretones 🥰

[katkittykattt]

se pasó bien anoche 😳🤕😈💋

[ystrike1]

Moretones - By 打了个渔 (7/10)

There's nothing wrong with using shock to make your story interesting. I would call Moretones a horror story, not a romance. Unfortunately the main couple is two cousins. If you can't deal with that don't read this. The "love interest" is a sociopathic child who grows up and becomes a yandere.

Here's a character chart for reference.

Qun Mo is an adorable child with an abusive mother...but he really isn't. Qun Mo is adopted and his mother is actually a man. "Her" husband made "her" dress as a woman because his parents would not approve of a man. Then that husband cheated on "her". That causes her relationship with her adoptive son to become stained. Qun Mo's father was abusive and it's it's heavily implied that his "mother" killed him.

The "mother" is very strict and "she" still lives as a woman even though her husband is gone. I'm unsure about "her" gender identity. You think the "mother" is the villain at first, but then the truth comes out.

Qun Mo is a sociopath. He doesn't care about other people or their pain. He develops a crush on his male cousin, who is much older than him. Qing is a normal guy who leads a decent life. He works in a kindergarten center and one of the teachers is interested in marrying him. Qing isn't ultra handsome but he has beautiful eyes and he's great with kids. He's quite popular. He takes care of Qun Mo and plays with him. Nobody else does because they think Qun Mo is weird. Qing doesn't notice because Qun Mo is a little kid.

Qing picks up a cute kitten. Qun Mo kills it. He feeds it to the local dogs.

Yup.

Need I say more? This is not a cute yandere story. Qun Mo also ruins Qings life. He doesn't want Qing to get married. So, he calls Qing a molester. That made me feel sick. Nobody believes Qing. He loses all of his friends and his potential wife. His father starts to hit him. He can't get a job. He has to do community service. There is no evidence against him except Qun Mo's testimony, but if course that's more than enough. Qing was never rich. He falls into poverty because of Qun Mo.

There was an actual molester in town. After Qing runs away to start a new life Qun Mo kills him. He's completely delusional. He thinks Qing will return if the real molester is caught. That's obviously not true. Qing can't stay in his hometown anymore.

Qun Mo stupidly ruined the good relationship he had with Qing.

He meets Qing as an adult, and rapes him immediately. There is absolutely nothing hot about this sex scene. Qun Mo should be in an asylum, and Qing should be a peacefully married teacher.

Only about to three chapters are cute. I understand why Qun Mo is crazy, but I don't want him to be with Qing.

If you like extreme yandere read this.

[annielpann]

[ndenecia]

Y el día que tu alma siga su camino,

y el día que tu alma abandonare estas tierras,

deseo que intacta no se marche; y es que yo

te deseo costurones y moretones,

porque allí yace la señal de un alma que no desistió,

un alma brava que no temió desafiar a la vida,

la misma vida que no quería ser domada.

Un alma cerril que aún y con miedos,

no se dejó acobardar al experimentar todos sus deseos,

y tatuada de dolor, de amor, de pasiones y ternura,

esa alma trascienda consciente de que aquí no se perdió de nada.

-Ndenecia

[elmundoestahechodefrasesyletras]

Enamorarse es como encontrarse un moretón y no saber con que te lo hiciste. Te pasó. No importa cómo, te marcó.

[elgatoquesoyyo]

Baila conmigo.

[allegramancha]

Ya extrañaba las marcas de ensayos✌🏻