Mrak gets a very good job offer from the mafia boss - too good to be true, and he later learns why. No matter how good he may be as a thief, it's still a bad idea to try stealing something from... you see who.
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Mrak gets a very good job offer from the mafia boss - too good to be true, and he later learns why. No matter how good he may be as a thief, it's still a bad idea to try stealing something from... you see who.
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Still alive
Azote, Taran, Mrak (casual size comparison)
Azote = average adult dragon size
Two from 3rd class district
Wire/rope + slight asphyxation
Mrak trying to get out before he becomes a darker snack on one of illegal 3rd class tournaments
Ain't so brave while kissing the ground, are you?
PD, what do you think about those characters: Mrak Longwing, Lithia Faintwing, Lisa Spikeback and Heastah Iceblade, in terms of character, design and background story?
Another one? wow okay. I know each of these so its gonna be easier to answer this one.
Mrak Longwing:design: gods, his expression is gold. I love his expression, the grumpiest of grumps. when i read his name in the ask i instantly think of his expression. I love it so much. I don’t even know why I love it so much I just do. …I’m just weird lets keep it at that. anyways, what I like about his design is his chestplates and colour sheme. The chest plates are really cool and sharp looking. dangerously looking, like his the bladed finger on his wings XD and despite my dislike for bright grey colours the darker grey/black parts just makes it look so much better to me, so much the grey just doesn’t bother me as much. plus, the grey marking by his eyes just adds more to his already grumpy expression. I love it~Character: Although there isn’t much written on his wiki , what is known about him, definitely fits him. the silent grumpy “IM SO DONE WITH ALL OF YOU” character he has, definitively shows in his design and I love it. even if the whole ‘Is small, hates people commenting on how small they are” is kinda…whats the word im seeking…overdone?overrated? stereotypicaly napoleon syndrome? I honestly don’t know. I just feel characters like that is done a lot. maybe not in PL but other stories yes. But seeing as there aren’t any/or many of such characters in PL its still fine. I don’t dislike Mrak for that or at anything at all. Backstory: Backstorywise there isn’t much to go on. He lost his family or at least his parents, and fled his tribe to do work for himself. But despite his grumpiness he still has goodness inside him as he offers his tribe support by supplying them with money to help them get by. Making me believe he isn’t all that bad even though he does kinda looks shady and I remember a picture where he threatened to cut a guardians throat, for reasons I don’t remember anymore. ah bad memory, my good friend.
Lithia Faintwing: Design: another grey dragon, didn’t think there were these many to be honest XD. I don’t think i have to say what i think of the light grey colour cause I have said it multiple times already. the darker shade of grey helps a bit though I’d like it a tat darker then that. the transparent wings and fin-membrane I do like as it seems like its an unique trait among nitrogen dragons. Making them stand out a bit more to me, maybe not as much as the starwing tribe or long wing tribes, but to me they do stand out a bit more from the general crowd. the fact some kids think of her as an alien, makes me chuckle. silly kids. Character: uh, not much to say here…there really isn’t much known about her. she is silent unless its necessary to talk. okay…what else? nothing??? ok.. . Kinda disappointing. I personally think she needs some more fleshing out..If that makes sense, I mean she does have a unique design and stands out, but her personality and character just…doesn’t have much at all to help her stand out even more. such wasted potential….. . Backstory: uh…another case of lack of info and wasted potential. its unknown where’s shes from as she never told anyone. I mean. where DID she come from? What was her live before she came to warfang? What is she like? Is there a reason to why she hardly talks? like tragic life? trauma? extreem discipline? What is HER STORY?! It just sadness me at this point. such an uniqe looking character , but to little KNOWN about her to actually make her STANDOUT. *sighs* *PD grammar nazi OFF* Lisa spikeback: Design: hello GREY long time no see *silent weeping* In all seriousness. another grey character here. She luckily as a much darker grey then the previous grey dragons I’ve seen. Its good on the eyes for me and the darker shades of grey and black do help with the design, she looks rather nice. I like all the spikes she has, she’s like a spiney ankylosaurs, without the actual armor plating. *gasp* SOMEBODY MAKE A ANKYLOSAURS DRAGON NOW!! PLZ FOR THE LOVE OF CAKE!!! err ahem. anyways, she looks decent, no markings on her body but thats alright~Character: Ohhh I like like her attitude. A first class dragoness that isn’t spoiled and knows better then that. She’s like one of those bitter tough girls, or at least to me that is XD. I like those girls that are tough. X3. Though I don’t like the fact she can possible try to kill someone. GURRRLLL THERE ARE OTHER WAYSSS, DON’T CHOSE MURDER. hmm She kinda reminds me of Dorathia, back when she was a freedomflyer. interesting. Backstory: oh wow, BIG BACKSTORY AHOY! I LIKE THAT, details detailllsssss.Lets see what we have here. I like how she did question her dad about her mother, where she was and such. Its a natural situation, to want to know about your ‘missing’ parent or family member, or so I think. Also the fact others avoided her cause of her looks, I can understand how lonely it must have felt. she later seems to know her father is hiding things, which is a thing that happens quite a lot in stories, so that is a little cliche , but I don’t consider cliche to be bad though. “cause something is cliche, it doesn’t mean its bad 83′ Its actually quite natural and I kinda like how so far the backstory can be relatable to some people. as I read more there are more cliches here and there but I don’t mind those I mean. the dad we’re talking about here was a FF and died at the BD without revealing the secret of Lisa’s mom. thats another cliche XD but again I don’t mind it. It sadness me that she turned to hate her guardian, I mean its not really her fault both her parents are gone now is it? She is trying to help her, but she pushes her away. Though I think this can be another relatable thing? wow this backstory is filled with so much relatable stuff and cliches I love it XD. the more i read however the more i start to feel bad about the guardian. and the more FF Dorathia comes to mind, goodgrief. I like this backstory a lot. Ah sorry all this probably doesn’t make sense . To just sum it up. I like her backstory and all the info it has. It just adds so much more to her character. I love detailed backstories like this one. Its like a whole story by itself and I really hope to see this in like a comic or picture form. Its really nice~ a tip for people making PL characters. try to make big backstories like this one, it really gives a better idea of the characters and their lives~ it makes me happy at least HAHAHAHBut yeah reading her backstory now, makes me believe she and my character Dorathia might actually get along to some extent. should contact her creator to talk about this hehehe.
Heastah Iceblade:Design: ahh… Heastah my favorite blueboy (aside from Xarei). I love his combination of blues and the striped markings he has. Those horns are quite fancy too. Overall I like his design, he clearly looks like an ice dragon~ Character: Happy characters, we need and heastah is one such happy characters. Or at least a joker XD. I like funny characters and they are definitely needed in order to make a story have a bit of a lightness in them. In PL there are a lot of tragic stories to go around, mainly cause the situation on PL is quite dire and dark. But thats what makes Funny and happiest characters like Heastah and Electroy stand out more. They give us a lil bit of a reliever from the sadness and darkness the universe of PL are in. While some find these ‘happy’ and ‘funny’ characters annoying, I personally like them. To me they are like lil sparks of light in the darkness of tragedy and despair. That said, heastah can be quite serious too which is nice too.Backstory: Ohhh heastah you spoil me, another big backstory here and a good one too. just like with Lisa’s backstory, heastah’s life has been divided in different timelines, helping us know when something happend and what they did at the time. Heastah’s relationship with his cousin Xarei is precious and he and his wife are most adorable looking together. He seemed to have hit a few bumps through his life which he overcame and he survived the battle of the BD, even though he went missing for a while. But alive he is , and I am very happy he did. I hope he’ll live for many years to come cause I’d truly hate to see him go. As for the details in his backstory there are plenty and I love it wholeheartedly. Well done rus WELL DONE!
I dunno if I missed anything here, but I’ll check this through a bit later just in case. I hope this answered your question anon.
Also, I’m getting this kind of asks quite a bit now XD Not that its bad, but I just hope to get a little… different kinds of asks now. to… well ya know change it up a little if you get what I mean You can ask me all kinds of things, including some more personal ones, though not to personal like WHERE DO YOU LIVE PD, OR CAN I HAZPHONENUMBERORMAIL OR WHAT IS YOUR FULL NAME cause i won’t answer those, for obvious reasons XDBut if you rather want to keep asking these kind of asks, its fine. I just might answer a lil slower then usual
once again, this is just my opinion, you do not have to agree with me. Everyone's different and thus everyone has different opinions. you may agree, you may disagree. I accept it either way.cause I want to be respectful to all of you. and remember
Treat people the way you want to be treated.you can’t expect people to treat you nice if your rude to them. so keep that in mind~