Yo, I just read the first work in your series, incredible, wonderful I adore this
I love your writing style it fits so well with the source content while continuing to be absolutely beautiful and conveying the message
Your characterisations of both of them, particularly in such awful scenarios, showing both of them comforting each other while trying to mask their own worries and insecurities, and the fact that that was so obvious in Gatsby despite the fact that it’s being told from nicks perspective
The fact that they never say I love you but they both feel it and understand completely
My favourite lines are certainly Nick wondering when he went from Gatsby to Jay in his head, wonderful, and when Gatsby says never so assuredly
I also love the idea that Nick and Jordan were both just using this as a lavender relationship, beautiful, and it so well explains their complete disinterest in both each other and other women/men that approach them
It’s just so good, I’m so excited for the rest
Thank you for making this exist
Oh my gosh it’s like you knew exactly what I wanted for my birthday eoejdidjd (commentary on my years long brainrot, this is all I ever want)
I’m so glad you enjoy it so far!!! I really can’t wait to hear what you have to say for the rest of it. The scope of this story has gone so far what I could have imagined—it’s three times the original novel in length. Which is insane.
All this to say thank you for dropping by!! I poured my heart and soul into this work, and worked with obssessive diligence to make sure it’s. Exactly what I wanted to present to the world. An attentive reader might just pick up on ALL sorts of stuff, especially once you get to Fugue for a Flapper. Let me know what you think if you read that far!