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[[please don't hate me, this is the first time I've submitted anything anywhere and written a HS style bio, and i couldn't for the life of me figure out the ALL CAPS bits to it, so you get a neatly typed up one instead :D i may have missed some things, but i did try to get everything]]
Aaaaah! Don't worry shoosh shoosh. The all caps is supposed to be a little bit like the narration in a comic book, you know, capitalizing important things in an attempt to convey the proper emphasis, but it's okay if you haven't figured it out yet!
> Be that monotone bastard
Oh huh these pictures are... not existing... like I can't see anything and they won't load just the picture that represents "not loading"
so I will use my imagination I suppose!
Your name is Namele Consep.
I have no objections here!
You are almost 7 solar sweeps old. You are monotone, and very easily walked over. You think yourself to be a ordinarily normal troll otherwise. Except that no one knows your gender, which you don't mind that no one can tell.
Androgynous characters are my favorite
uh this is all good and I made a happy sound but "ordinarily normal" sounds a little redundant! You only need one of those words in there because they mean the same thing!
You like to do a variety of things, such as fishing. Unfortunately, you never learned how to fish, so you kind of just stick your head under the water and watch the fish swim by in complete safety. You live in a village of trolls that sits in a valley. Leaving the village is a task, but you and the others of your kind have made a thin path through the mountains. 'The others of your kind' refers to the dullbloods as you've been called, trolls whose blood looks like it was mixed with gray. Being a blue dullblood, other trolls very commonly think that your blood is gray more so than the others.
1. Fishing by sticking head under the water and just waiting for a fish to like swim in their mouth or something-- YES PLS REALLY GOOD.
2. Village with mountain paths-- stretching it a little, but I'm pretty 0kay with that.
3. "Dullbloods"-- full stop. Woah. I really hope this gets explained more because... huh. I'm really not sure how I feel about that yet. Is it a mutation? Is that why they're all together? Wouldn't they just get culled, if that were the case?
All the Lusii of your village are smaller animals, such as your mom. She is a large bat, but she is still small nonetheless. She keeps you from drowning when you go fishwatching. You become so enthralled by the fish that you forget you cant breathe underwater, your lusus bites you and you 'wake up'.
though I'm not sure why they all have tiny lusii?? Is it because dullbloods tend to need less protection or something?
You like string. String, yarn, rope, twine, all of them. You decorate your clothing with yarn with a similar color to your blood. You have strings of various colors strewn about your hive. You are also an artist, you have many sketches on paper and files on your computer pertaining to your interest in drawing your acquaintances so you can remember what they look like.
oh yeah this part is pretty good! I like the yarn and the string and the art things. That's pretty great! And the part about drawing people so they don't forget how people look ahhh poor baby <33
You don't leave your village very often to keep your kind from being found out about and culled and it could go months without seeing them.
SO dullbloods are a mutation that gets culled? Why are the grubs allowed to escape to this village at all, then? I'd imagine they'd get found, if they're all just in the mountains...
oh hm. Maybe. Maybe the village is like. Built on chicken legs or something like Baba Yaga and it wanders around throughout the mountains hiding from everyone with little grubs of various mild mutations? Like, maybe your blood is verging on too bright and too dull and if you're lucky, a lusus will take you to Baba Yaga Land where you will get a chance to become a strong and charming little thing and then there will be much less reasons for you to be culled y/y?
IDK I just want an excuse to think about a village running around on mountains
Your matesprit sliced your right eye out to 'bring you down a peg' and that's all you'll say about that.
yeahhhh okay I am not sure how to feel about this part at all. Since matespritship is supposed to be based on mutual pity (which manifests as some sort of fondness), someone hurting their matesprit seems a bit odd. I mean, especially with that reasoning: that sounds like something you would do in an extremely intense kismesis rivalry!
I... I guess... I guess I can imagine a dysfunctional matespritship based around like, Münchausen Syndrome, where one party would hurt themselves in order to get pitied more? And maybe there could be a thing where you would hurt your matesprit in order to pity them more, or something.
IDK if you're going to have this kind of abusive relationship, you'll have to think about how troll romance would affect it.
You are commonly called by the people in your village as "M" as the symbol on your shirt resembles it, every dullbloods' symbol resembles a letter and are referred to as such. You wield the scissorkind specibus with a ordinary pair of scissors. Your trollian tag is smilingOptimist and you ...speak in a very Monotone voice... with the exception of your M's... and pause very often...
The strife sounds fine! The quirk is... eh, it could be better. Monotony is, well, monotonous! And anyway, trailing off into ellipses isn't the best way of representing that. Just ending every sentence with one period delivers a much more decisive and flat way of speaking, I think! The part about the M's is good though.
Uhh the trolltag could be better too. I mean, it's a little redundant I think, because yeah, optimists smile! That's what they do! You could make it something like smilingPessimist or melancholicOptimist maybe IDK it's up to you I'm just thinking it could be much better?
[[i know i could have done better elaborating some things, like her lusus and why her eye got sliced out, im sorry, i couldnt get it to sound right in a hs style bio in my opinion <:\ *all awkward* ]]
Yeahhh I want to know more about a lot of things here! The part about the eye is really like WHAT, WHAT, WHAT ARE YOU DOING
It's okay if you couldn't all fit it in the homestuck-style bio! Those are usually short and more information is revealed as you go. But if you'd like to put in longer bio parts or something or other or... I don't know I'm just a bit curious about a lot of things here!
Anyway in general I like your fancharacter; there are just some elements that strike me as something you should put a lot more thought into if you're going to have them as part of her. Think more about the dullblood issue, and the whole thing with the matesprit, and you'll be gold. (:
