while i don’t think this is exactly what jack personally is looking for saying i personally just sounds funky this is definitely a really cool looking rpg that i’m happy to rec. @nightcallhq has some great looking graphics and a cool synopsis and plot that i think people would definitely be interested in even if it isn’t my thing right now!! good luck guys and thanks for the rec nonn!
hello jessie! we’re a newly revamped skeleton rp about a group of gifted vigilantes trying to protect their decaying city. could we please trouble you for an opinion? thank you so much!
absolutely ! opinion for nightcallhq is under the cut below. remember that this is just my opinion & i mean no harm. with that being said, i do wish you nothing but the best for you & this group
theme/graphics — so due to the fact that this is the first thing that i see once i go into the page, we’ll talk about it first. i’m not too big on the theme, huge header themes like that hasn’t always been my cup of tea, but you’re making it work. and though, graphics for an rp isn’t really the main thing, i do look into that when going onto the page, just because aesthetic. however the graphics are very lovely, i’m digging the color scheme you’ve got going on. i feel like it’s fitting with everything.
navigation — everything is easy to navigate around, i’m not sure why, but i really like the two different sides for the before & after applying. i just think it looks very well organized with it like that.
plot — that’ll be enough of the basics, we’re gonna move onto the plot, because for me, that is the most important. it’s so well written, i love the dialogue in between, it definitely gives a comic book feel to it. honestly, if this was a comic book or even just a regular fictional book by itself, i would pick it up and read it. i like the idea of calling them vigilantes and not heroes. overall, i really enjoy the idea of the plot.
skeletons — the skeletons are great, i loved reading the little prompts/background for all of them, i do think it’s a good idea that you gave them all different age ranges and that this whole group isn’t just based upon younger kids/adults, i think that older characters are quite underused, which sucks because they can be fun to play as. so having some of those skeletons be a bit older is a great concept.
misc — i like the idea of having a page for alternate fcs for said skeletons, so that’s a good thing to have. just like the triggers page, i always recommend that every rp has one, as well as put it into the applications just in case that the person applying has a certain trigger that isn’t listed yet on the list. so great job on that.
i think that about covers it. i have nothing else to say, besides the fact, as stated previously, that i wish this group nothing but the best !!
hello kath! could we please trouble you for a shoutout? YOUR CITY IS NOT SAFE. you know this. but you – you’re special, gifted with abilities far outside the realm of human possibility. you don't know why, or where they came from, only that you don your mask, and gather your weapons. if you cannot save your home, you can protect it. nightcall is a revamped skeleton rp about a group of gifted vigilantes trying to protect their decaying city. thank you so much!
Hey! We’re a brand new skeleton rp about a group of young and gifted vigilantes trying to protect their decaying city. Could we trouble you for an opinion? Thank you so much!
So that concept it actually really interesting in this almost vigilante/super hero quality that I feel like people do a lot but don’t push far enough past things that have already been canon. Its also intriguing that from the start you know that you can’t change whats going on but instead are tasked at protecting it so it doesnt get worse because I feel like, especially in superhero/mutant type roleplays, it quickly becomes you trying to solve a huge problem that logically can’t be solved in a short timeline. Here you are allowing the players to keep more human qualities, that I feel a lot of people struggle with when they worry the weight of the whole world is on their shoulders. Some of the suggested face claims are a bit hard for me because they have done things that personally make me uncomfortable but I do appreciate that everyone is over 18 and that you have suggested a pretty wide range for people to choose from. I would possibly suggest starting a tag for other fc suggestions since I could see people asking for other options a bit (though I do see that you are tagging specific ones for specific characters, it might also be beneficial to just have one in general). This way the tag becomes a database where you don’t have to answer the same question over and over but can also be used if members wish to suggest specific face claims by merely sending in an ask with the fc and the character. For me, when I run roleplays, it becomes an easy resource to link to. Having a trigger list is so important and I applaud you for doing so because there are still quite a few roleplays that don’t. I would also add a small detail on how to tag triggering material because tumblr is screwed up and while I appreciate tw suicide as a tag, most of the time it doesnt fully work so I would recommend you stating that the tagging should be done in a certain way so that everyone is on the same page. Overall, it looks like a really amazing roleplay and I wish you all the luck in it. In the future, I think it could be interesting to have some villain type characters also in there or even just more people struggling with the role they are now in due to their powers. I know you wish to keep it as a smaller group, which is understandable but just something to keep in mind.