'I think your dialogues and expressions aren't distinct in any manner and it'd make it nicer if you'd try to really bring out character traits in words as well as actions.'
👆🏼 constructive criticism
'I didn't like what you put out because I personally don't like things like that but read it anyway hoping for my opinions to miraculously change but was thoroughly disgusted and am now mad you couldn't make me like something I have hated forever. You made a character do this and that which they won't ever do and you didn't write the story the way I wanted it written so I will ask you to try to understand the characters better so our head canons align.
Because I am the boss and know best.'
👆🏼 shitting on somebody's hard work because you were personally biased against it and then going on to nitpick for errors and scream in the comments. This is rude. Don't do it, guys.















