First look review for nowherelefttorun-rpg.
The slight change in color makes a huge difference. I'm a fan of your theme, it's simple, easy to navigate and easy on the eyes. Your icon and the left image make a clear message to any fan out there: zombies, and your url fits the desperation and theme of an apocalyptic roleplay. Right away, I like the fact that you don't use mascots and don't clutter your dash. Your admin notes are shorter and to the point, and you value criticism and opinions from your followers. I like your map section. It's simple and you've explained all of your symbols, while giving us a picture we can use with your plot section.
Your lore section gives me what I need to know. With other types of RPs, I would say it didn't show me enough, but the lore in a zombie apocalypse is different. Research isn't exactly possible, and people are scared, confused and misinformed. It's very important to give us something, though, and you've done that by spelling out the infestation of the virus, if it is a virus, and giving us an origin story in your plot page.
Be careful with your spelling and grammar. I know how easy it is to look over something and miss small typos, especially when trying to get so much information up. I haven't seen any major spelling or grammar issues, but a few small ones here and there, a missing coma or two, or awkwardly worded sentences.
Another small issue is in your plot section, you change tense. The first bullet point is past-tense, while the next couple are present tense and then it goes back to past tense.
I think your roleplay has a ton of potential, and - like most zombie roleplays - it's really going to come down to your bios to push it into a great roleplay.
