#ohs rewrite

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So I'm about to get to perhaps my favorite scene in the og story and I want to write it as well as I had the first time but I'm super worried I'm not gonna do it as much justice. I'm somewhat tempted to copy & paste it but I also know there are some details I want to change so it's like :| yikes

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Not really sure what part of Kyle's life to make this novel end at. Kind of wondering if instead of making this a novel-novel if I should break it into parts and make them novellas, like I was going to do with The Fall of the Sirens (I should really start writing that again, I miss Maloi and Glorie)...

Idk. Maybe? Idk.

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I cannot believe the OHS rewrite is already almost 7.5k words :o

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Kyle's having a lot of prophetic dreams in this rewrite. I think he's had like 3 so far? One involving adult versions of himself, one involving them again but also adult versions of his little sister Amelia and one about Dana right before the scene I just posted :o

This is too fun xD

@magic-is-something-we-create @lordkingsmith

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Another little snippet from my rewrite of OHS, draft one. I just have to say rewriting this was a FANTASTIC idea, courtesy of my hubsy, because I am enjoying this immensely and I love Kyle so much T_T

@amandahoyle @jade-island-lives @bathingindirtyteacups @poore-choice-of-words

PS: that was a typo. It's supposed to say covered in the blood of the bear, not the wolf.