Mar 29
Won't I be sitting on the bus reading GGST chapter 12 and tapping on the window frame (because I'm not some uncivilized savage, so I wouldn't do it on the glass) testing at what pace Shikamaru knocks on the door?
! I knocked on things so many times while reworking that scene. Now I'm just imagining you knocking on a bus! 😂 I'm soooo thrilled the intensity of the knock came through! It really is a paced 1 2 3, fully pulling her out of the pre-meeting jitters. That makes me so happy to hear. Tysm.
#intensity as in what the knock means and what it results in#NOT as though he's banging on the door#on the contrary. he's nervous on the other side of it#unsure what he's supposed to do while also completely understanding her#the humiliation of desire out in the open air#his home he would've strolled in a bit easier#pulled glasses down from a cabinet#already had wine in the fridge and they probably would've spoken a LOT more#her sending the address limited it to sex in a way idk if he had prior#hm. it was always going to end at her place so i will need to ruminate on this further. but interesting corner ive dug myself into#(ruminate on what actually would've happened at his place had she not panicked and ran)#because even if the end result was sex#i think the path there would've looked very different. it would've been a different chapter.#hmmmm.#ty for sending this#oseahellooo#answered#ggst