paradoxtrapped replied to your post “okay but that one critic calling derek a jared krushner look alike and...”
i got so angry but now im just like mildly entertained
i honest to god thought it was satire when i read it?? like i didnt even have a chance to be mad about it, my reaction went from disbelief to “turn it into a meme”
if this isnt the journalism version of shit posting though then i dont know what is
bridges is iconic (tm) but honestly i love Nice Work sm... Kelli is so wonderful in everything tho. I think I just love Billie so I’m leaning towards Nice Work (and pajama game,,, good stuff)
After another unfortunate break due to the fact i unfortunately have a life outside PT, im here to bring you an upgrade to some old stuff!! just before i start working on the new.
TLDR in case you dont want the long reason: PT's prolog is kinda shit so im gonna be updating it so that its pacing is better and also the art meets the standards of my current skills.
IF YOU WANT THE LONG OF IT READ MORE
ok so recently ive been thinking alot about my work on PT so far. Since i havent really been working on it due to collage and junk and also just a lack of motivation which ocasionally hits me, and while looking back on pt's prolog i relised how... fast? the pacing was? Nothing really had time to sit. Things were introduced and had little time to explore them. Half of the things in Veritas Room werent even interacted with. Most stuff in the hidden room wasnt interacted with either. And also the writing just kinda sucked??? and unlike something like Johns introduction from HS you couldnt really gadge Verita as a person from her introduction and interactions in the prolog, She doesnt even really react to the readers sudden preasence.
So. Thinking on these issues i decided, Im going to remake PT's Prolog. I will redraw the panels, Rewrite pages, maybe even add some new ones in the process. Perhaps add more CSS stuff or something. Since while i mostly have issues with pacing most of the early pages in PT kinda suck visually. Just look at Veritas Old Sprite compared to now.
Ultimately, the goal is to improve the Prolog so i can start working more on Act 1. get back into the groove of drawing in HS's style, get back into the writing, and also just make a better story so that newer readers will get more enticed. I want PT to be the best it can be, and while this might take a while this should hopefully help in that goal.
Course as i work on PT in general my art style and writing will get better. So someday i might be compelled to do this again in the future. but for now i think this is a solid way of getting me back in the chair.
Thank you for reading, and i hope to see you guiding our hero soon.
DO YOU ENJOY YOUR FANADVENTURES HAVING DECENT MUSIC!? WELL YOUR NOW IN LUCK BECAUSE PARADOXTRAPPED HAS AN UPDATE REPLACING THE OLD KINDA BAD FAMITRACKER TRACKS.
YOU CAN FIND ALL SONGS MADE FOR PT INCLUDING THE OLD ONES HERE: