Hey there! I can't find your thoughts post for Retrace 104: Will. ^^' Oh... or If it's not up, sorry for asking about it. ^^''' You're very busy, so I don't want to make you feel pressured about it. (Maybe one of these days I'll get off anon with a question x)
Yeah, no thoughts post is up. There probably isn’t going to be one. Those posts just took too much out of me I also just ended up writing up the vast majority of my thoughts when I was answering Asks that people sent me, so I ended up not really seeing a point in doing one. In general, I think Retrace 104 was a satisfactory ending. It was certainly beautiful and emotionally fulfilling, but I thought Mochizuki-sensei could have used those 102 pages and put them to better use. I feel like a lot of nothing happened and that the Dream Tea Party sequence was way too long. There ending up being more loose ends then I thought there would be.I really loved how she handled Vincent, Rufus, Sheryl, Oz, Alyss, Cheshire (even though, to be honest, his returning was annoying and kinda unnecessary and the time spent on his scenes could have been used towards Alice or later towards wrapping up Jury’s arc properly), and Reim…I guess. I really don’t know where to put him…I think they had the best character arc wrap ups (in 104, not generally speaking).
The others I felt she either just completely forgot about them (Hey there, Lotty, Dug, Lily, and Levi!), didn’t give them a proper wrap up (Hey there Sharon, Alice (she can also just kinda double as being forgotten), and Jury - that subplot was just kinda left hanging), or just didn’t give that little extra push to make me feel completely satisfied with their character arc wrap up (mostly Gilbert, Leo, and Jack - I just wish we could have gotten one thought about Oswald in the end, when Jack finally knew himself). I also felt that the issue with the Core of the Abyss was handled a bit too quickly and neatly.It certainly wasn’t the worse ending though, was quite touching and beautiful in many ways, and any information that we might get in the guidebook and such may end up changing some of my feelings on how some things. We’ll have to wait and see. If you want to read more detailed thoughts on things though, just check out my PH Ask, Retrace 104, and PH ending tags. You’ll have to go back quite a bit, but I answered a lot of questions and asks about Retrace 104 and my thoughts on various things that happened in that chapter. You can find all of my responses there. :)















