PITCH WARS 2017 #pimpmybio
Hellooooo and welcome! I’m Victoria.
I’m submitting a YA dual-timeline alt-history political fantasy for 2017 #pitchwars. Come find me on twitter!
THE FEVER KING is a hero-to-villain origin story. TFK is basically all about the psychological impact of being a revolutionary and the thin line between hero and villain.
It’s like SHADOW AND BONE met VICIOUS and their baby had:
the programming skills of MR ROBOT &
the revolutionary fervor of Magneto from X-MEN.
Two boys’ lives intersect across a chasm of a hundred years.
1969, North Carolina. Calix Lehrer has a genius for military strategy. He’s survived four years of torture at the hands of a government that fears people with abilities like Calix’s power of mind control. Liberated, he joins his unstable brother’s domestic terrorist organization, plotting to seize control of the country and build a sovereign witching state in its place. Calix is determined to be colder than the demons that haunt his nightmares...but as his strategies for victory become increasingly lethal he might become the kind of monster that can’t be saved.
2074, Carolinia. Noam Álvaro would do anything--even go to prison--if it meant justice for refugees like his parents. Conscripted into a government-funded elite magical training program, Noam vows to use his new magical power over technology to fight for refugee rights. That means allying himself with legendary war hero and Minister of Defense Calix Lehrer to plot a political coup against the same country Lehrer founded 100 years ago. As Noam’s loyalties are thrown into conflict, Noam has to decide how far he’s willing to go for justice—and if avenging his family is worth becoming the villain.
TROPEY GOODNESS:
alternate history &
dual timelines &
magic is literally a virus &
complicated sibling relationships &
queer enemies-to-lovers &
ambitious fuckups &
boys who read Nabokov and Wittgenstein &
morally grey protagonists &
charismatic villains &
genius bastards &
past trauma &
political intrigue &
slow slooow burn &
unreliable narrators &
questionable decisions &
psychological manipulation &
love interests on opposite sides of an ideological conflict &
divided loyalties &
trying very very very hard not to get a crush on the much-older might-be-villain.
You’ll like this story if you like complicated emotional journeys where the Right Side of the Conflict is ambiguous and the narrator may or may not be extremely unreliable.
AESTHETICS:
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ON DIVERSITY:
Diversity in literature is extremely important to me. As a writer with several marginalized identities, I represented some of these among the two main characters (yay for #ownvoices!). I also did my research when including identities to which I do not belong, and am very open to feedback on the representation of these characters.
Characters in this story are people of color, gay and bisexual, Jewish, and have mental illness.
ME ME ME ME ME!
I have a graduate degree in psychology and have written 22 (count ‘em) complete novels before this one, although this is the first I’m trying to publish. (Yes, I started very young. And am kind of a perfectionist. These previous books were of variable quality.) I also used to write fanfiction. (Whatever, I’ll admit it.) (Parenthetical asides are fun.)
I currently live in Europe, but am American. Sadly, I am moving back to the US soon. I hail from the dogwood state, North Carolina, and THE FEVER KING is set in my hometown of Durham.
Hmm, let's see. One time I hitchhiked from Thailand to Myanmar in the back of a van, stuffed between packages of beer, propane gas, live chickens, and the three other people we picked up on the side of the road.
I think Python is the objective best programming language.
Also, I feel like I ought to say that I am very fond of constructive criticism. I have a thick skin. I can take it. I really can. Bring it on.
Honestly, as I see it, I want to become a better writer--and the best way to do that is to practice and get feedback. At the end of the day, it’s not about whether this scene was bad or not, it’s about how I can make the scene better. My goal is to strive for excellence. In grad school we talk a lot about being lifelong learners, and that’s me. I know I can always improve. This book has been through five drafts so far over these two years, with three critique partners. Editing and I are very good friends.
So go drench my MS in red ink, because I am here for it.
SOUNDTRACK?
You betcha.
Control (Halsey)
Two Evils (Bastille)
Young God (Halsey)
War Sweater (Wakey Wakey)
Evening on the Ground (Iron and Wine)
Born to Die (Lana Del Rey)
THANKS FOR READING MY THING, and go check out all the other mentees on the #pimpmybio hashtag on twitter or right here! Thanks also to Brenda Drake and the organizers for making Pitch Wars 2017 happen.
If you want to see more, I pin inspiration pics for THE FEVER KING on Pinterest here.



















