#pokr5

[keldeos-archive]

wow i got your space mail about yuri

good 

[cirrostatic]

☁

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hint for betting one: main characters are hikikomori and NEET

ok i was kinda thinking it was ngnl and ive got two other people saying thats it so. ngnl

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hint for the teenagers one - protag is basically ordinary person, everyone else has talent

man why am i so bad at guessing dangan ronpa what the hell

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the one anime where people bet things in games

isnt that called gambling

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teenagers murdering in high school

man. idk thats kinda vague

[viddertips]

Submitted by pokr5

Hi there! I would like to request a concrit! I recently got some motivation again for editing and I would like to see if I would still be good or if I’m a bit rusty at this c;

Your actual composition of scenes is nice, but your exposure is very strong and makes the contrast between white and dark scenes harsh on the eyes. Also it causes the thin white text very hard to read. Some of the scenes are slow and you should work on having the pacing align more with the combination of beats and lyrics instead of just a whole line of lyric. The actual colours and material are nice though, and the atmosphere is nice for the song.

- Kai

[rainyfrogs]

i don't see ads

Yo really? I guess I did get rid of them. Cause they were there a few weeks ago and I thought I got rid of them but I went on my tumblr on my bros computer and they were there... It was probably just his computer... Thanks for the help though!!