Poor grammar, spelling and punctuation are not stylistic writing choices, they are just laziness!
Read through your writing before posting it. If every sentence is a stand alone "paragraph" because you haven't used a single period, edit that shit before posting.
Ellipses are made up of three periods, not two, not four, and certainly not seven. You are also very likely over using them and not using them correctly. They are very rarely called for.
Look up what a comma splice is and learn how to stop using them. I promise there are ways to convey that thought properly.
I want to read your story. Other people want to read your story. Make it easier for us to do so. Please!