Let me get this out of the way before I go back into study/ school mode.
Imagine Youth Pastor! Doma or Priest! Doma... like, just, imagine it. \
Father Doma.
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"Father..." you whimper as he cups your face, leaning into his hand, fluttering your lashes up at him with the face of an angel. If only your community can see you two now, in such a forbidden position yet such a sacred moment you valued, they would surely run your beloved out of town. The thought alone had your eyes turn glossy, knowing you wouldn't be able to cope if he left. "Doma..."
He hums in delight, enjoying seeing his favorite church member look at him with such adoration. It made his blood rush and chest swell. "My child, what a pretty girl...," Doma coos with a smile, tracing your jawline with a single finger and tilting your head back oh ever so slowly. "Truly the Lord has blessed you with immeasureable beauty, I'm afraid you might be the cause of why I break my sacred vow. Though, for you, I don't mind committing such a sin." The man sighs and leans in as close as his faith would allow him, the small gap between your lips causing a warmth to bloom in your chest. Yet all you could focus on was how soft his touch was, how the smell of his sweet cologne enthralled your senses, the beating of your heart almost deafening that you almost missed how his honeyed voice lowered.
"The devil truly is stronger than a man...," he whispers, his mouth ghosting over yours, breaths mingling. He nearly closes the gap, though instead, he lets out a quiet laugh. "But you, my dear, are the greatest test to a Man of God... and I would gladly see how far we're willing to go in this wicked game before our sin completly consumes us."
"If it means we can still be together, Father, I would disobey the Lord himself and welcome our fall from grace."
Doma giggles and presses a chaste kiss to your mouth, pulling away before you can truly melt against him. He places a hand on your hip and grasps your chin with the other. Such a good girl, he thought, taking in how eagerly you leaned in for more, only stopping because of him. He runs his tongue over his lips and sighs. "Oh, my child, that isn't necessary. Surely Our Father, art thou in heaven, understands why a devoted follower or two would stray. It's all in his plan and we must follow it. After all, love covers over a multitude of sins."
"I love you, Doma."
"I love you too, [Name], my sweet angel."
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Does it reveal more messed-up things about me? Probably. Those outfits they wear just... hit different.
I don't know, like, thinking of the ending of kny, I feel like if he was reincarnated he'd be something like that.
Seongjun definitely has an authority kink and loves to fuck their partner stupid. I rest my case -🌿anon
🌿 anon, yes, yEs, YES!! God yes, that sounds like the man himself!
Seongjun has an authority kink, loves to be called/refer to himself as 'master' as he makes his S/O cry from how good his cock is stretching their walls, how his cockhead presses bruising kisses to her womb, yet all they can focus on is the mind-numbing pleasure from Seongjun's dick.
Seoungjun grins from ear to ear, rutting his hips at a wild pace, your legs placed onto his shoulders, giving him the perfect angle where the wet clicks of your squelching cunt are in perfect pitch with your pathetic moans. He couldn't help but admire the drool leaking from the corner of your mouth, the way your glossy eyes rolled to the back of your head, the dazed, fucked-out expression on your face — like a goddamn sinful painting only he can create.
A crying, beautiful mess only he can make.
"Look at you, so needy and desperate for your master's cock, like a useless whore, hm? Fuck – your pussy missed me too, baby, squeezing around me like the perfect cocksleeve. Ugh, s-such a good girl for me, such a good girl for master. Can't fucking wait to cum inside your sweet cunt, baby."
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These will be short because I accidentally posted this while scrolling through my drafts and i couldn't save it as draft again lol🥲
My favorite writers... this is like asking me what I want for my birthday and everything I ever wanted just poofs out of my mind.
But let's try to list everyone, and since I have the bad habit of not following the blog and losing my place, I'm going back and forth with finding them and following them.
I recommend checking them out because, wow.
Heads up tho, some do write about explicit themes and content that is not always suitable for everyone. Work is still amazing, imo.
@kazooli -- love their BNHA writing and inspired a lot of my darker work.
@married-to-google-translater -- have you read their Obey me work? *Chef's kiss* beautiful. The boys are all in character and wowow, heart pumping!
@legoshi-plz -- love their Beastars work and their Pretense series is what sealed the deal for me.
@slasherhaven -- the way they write Micheal Myers makes me frothe at the mouth.
@k-dokja -- ok, so they're Lookism work is amazing and actually inspired/motivated me to write about Lookism.
@reality-phantom -- their pegging Doma work is what made me write about Doma in the first place. But their other kny pieces are awesome!
@diablo-writing -- also inspired my darker work, specifically my Doma petal series and the breeding program for the Iroh series.
@whumperooni -- dark content that made me question myself but detail in their work that is *mwah*.
@wolfishwriting -- their William Afton work made me simp for the man even harder and start simping for Micheal Afton.
@plus-size-reader -- this blog was my source of comfort when for the first time in years I read about my favorite charcters with my body type. Tho I changed physically, it still brings me joy to read.
@jackrrabbit -- nsfw pieces made me hot. I really can't think straight after reading their work.
There's more likely more writers I like but I can't remember well enough because I'm a dumbass that forgets to follow ;-;. That's probably what I get for sleeping late af and rely too much on caffenine. Uhh, can you guys reccomend some blogs to check out? Like, I feel like I should know more but I'm lost in a way.
I don't come on this blog to read but I should make this my main blog ( i have a throw-away blog) soon so I can get to know everyone more and be more "social" and active, y'know? I think that makes sense, but I'll think about it.
If this happens to make people question me or lose respect for me, that's fine. Go ahead, bound to happen.
Can we have YAN!Upermoon!Uzui and his YAN!Demon!Wives with a captured Slayer?
I read this as Yandere demon! Uzui and wives and I need to think about it cause I'm a little iffy about Uzui. Ima try to get a better grip of his character and see how that works later on🤔
ayo bestie I'm back! HAHAHAHAHA I KINDA FORGET MY ROUTINE BECAUSE OF MY SCHOOL WORKS THAT I PURPOSELY IGNORE
My sister and I have is talking as always but there is this idea- rather a question that both of us can't answer so what did I do? ofc I'm going to ask my fav writer/bestie you can't do anything about it you're my bestie now but that is not the point so the thing is how you guys write this second lead that would end up giving the readers second lead syndrome cuz boi I don't know, I tend to have favorites and that's not fair if I write something like that it would be obvious 😅😭.
Bruh, bestie you are lucky enough to have your friends in class that wanted to be with you🤧 and now you're a leader of a group?? Honestly, king/queen/royalty shit. Wish you luck on your assignment!!!♡
HAHAHAHAHAHA I FOUND A WAY TO REPLY! I feel like I'm so smart 2dei!
Honestly, good thing I could blend with them cuz oh boi it would be awkward to be with them doing this for our grades then we don't get along, for now my group mates and I are doing great! at least for now tho....
I'd be back soon, just going to finish this work load I ignore for a couple of weeks! take care bestieeee~ <3 ✨
Sjsksj, dw about it. School is important so please focus and do ur best😩😩 Unlike me who decided to do a long ass assignment that was due yesterday. It's okay tho, he gave us until Tuesday to turn it in dut to a holiday.
SSJKSJSJ TY?? I AM HONOERED TO BE ONE OF UR FAVS!!♡♡ And bestie, we were besties since the first message😪
But moving on!
"how you guys write this second lead that would end up giving the readers second lead syndrome"
Oh this is tricky. Ok, let me try the best to answer this. I had to look up second lead syndrome because I'm like "what is this??"
But makes so much more sense now that I know: "wanting the second lead to end up with the main lead rather than their intended partner".
And if I'm understanding right (which I hope I am) is you want to know how to achieve that (right? plz, this will be embarrasing if im wrong)
Here we go!
How to Write Second Lead Syndrome
Okay, so let's establish that this is basically some weird love triangle. You have to think about their place in the story. Why are they there, what purpose do they serve, and how do they affect the story? Don't just focus on one person, focus on both second lead and intended partner and have their charcter/personality mean something. Don't just forget about them and randomly include them again. Once they're introduced, keep bringing them in!
Example:
Create some chemistry between your main lead and second lead; whether it be banter, an intimate moment, rivals, etc. They have an interesting /close relationship with the main lead that may or may not be romantic. Give the readers something to work with b/c that random coffee barista who took their order will probably not be shipped with the main lead beacuse they said "here's your order, sweetheart" and we never hear of them again. Won't appease to everyone or help your story.
But remember, not everyone will like it if your second lead is mean, borderline abusive to the main lead. You gotta sprinkle in some fluff or at least don't make it... too worrisome.
Example:
ML and SL arguing over who ruined a task and blaming each other, but you can 'see' one of them finding the situation amusing or it makes them react the same way. Yet, over time, they begin to get along after a certain moment or grow closer.
OR,
Main lead doesn't realize how perfect their second lead (i.e. best freind) is and ignores them for their love interest.
Give them more "screen-time". By that, I mean incoprarte your second lead more in a way that pleases the readers/goes with the story. Give them more lines! More scenes with the main lead! Make us feel something! It'll play in well with establishing their character and their place in the story while maybe also adding some chemistry.
If wattpad and tumblr has taught me anything, it's drama. I dont know about you, bestie, but that unexpected drama is mouth-watering. It can by between just two of them or all of them, your choice. Personally, I like when the two people are fighting over the main lead or one of them hides their feelings for the other. Or like, second lead makes a big deal about something concerning main lead. Anything like that really.
Example:
"Dumbass, why didn't you fight back?! Or call for help?!" Adam shouts, gripping your arms tightly and breathing heavily, his hands trembling even as he held you. You looked at him in shock, seeing his golden eyes turn glossy. "Do you know how scared I was?! H-How scared I was getting that call that you... that you almost died...?"
"Adam..."
The "show, not tell" tip is extremely important here (imo). Why? You want to show the readers what your character might be feeling and have their minds fill in the blanks. However, it's sometimes nice to have some context.
Example: Tell vs Show. (this is something made on the spot, random names)
Adam stopped talking and smiling once you walked in, the crush he habored for you seemingly growing in an instant. He regretted at that moment, how cold and mean he was when all you wanted to do was be his friend.
God, you were so beautiful, like an angel. And every man at the party thought the same thing, making Adam furious that he couldn't claim you as his. He hears your laugher from where he stands, almost as if he was right next to you.
Adam, as much as he hated to admit it, was absolutely enamored with you, despite all his wrong doings. But how could he say it now when all he ever was to you was a bully? He was so caught up in his thoughts, he didn't even notice his friend calling out to him.
vs
Adam's words died in his mouth, trailing off as the woman of the hour finally walked in. His heart beat wildly in his chest as his gaze landed on you, heat crawling up his neck as he drank in how the girl he hated had vanished in mere hours and had been replaced with the most beautiful woman he's ever seen. Yet, you had already haunted his waking mind and now, the image of you tonight would haunt his dreams.
In his eyes, you looked nothing more than a sinful angel stepping down from her chariot, wrapped in crimson and black, immersed in what he could only describe as pure lust - pure temptation to him. Yet, like an angel among demons, the men in the crowd could only look at you in hunger as they notice your presence, beginning to make their way to you as if they were in a trance.
Adam could only watch and seethe in his spot, his blood boiling at the thought of any man approaching you. His hold on his bottle tightens, clecnhing his jaw as his mouth goes dry. Even from this distance, your laugh reached him and it made his stomach churn.
The calling voice of his friend fell on deaf ears, his trickster mask falling for a moment as his smile falls completely. The memories of every hurtful word he spat at you when you greeted him came crashing down -- every sarcastic comment, every insult, every nasty and hateful thing he said when all you wanted is to be his friend. His brows furrow and his gaze falls to the floor.
I did not excecute this correctly, holy shit.
Don't think the first one is bad!! Both are acceptable, but sometimes readers like to read something that insiuates the possibility of something else without ever saying it. It's just that the word "was" tends to sound repetive at times and it always depends on the scne you're working on. If someone says don't use "was", ignore them. That choice is all yours.
But you get what I'm trying to do, right? I didn't say he had a crush in the second one, but I did point to it with my descriptions (i hope). This is something you can try to do or be blunt like in the first one.
Remember: context is important and the first one can work perfectly if you already laid your foundation.
Establish why the main lead should be with the second lead or why they're better. Let's say second lead is the better person than the intended lover, and if you managed to create some chemistry and history with your main and second lead, it will play out more effectively when the time comes for you to make your decision. Also can frustrate readers (in a good way).
However!! Like I said before, try to make the main lead and second lead have chemistry in a way that makes them work together, not clash and fall apart everytime they get together. Make them have common ground and build more interactions from there, something that makes them connect in a way they don't with the intended love interest.
Make your second lead's life not revolve around the main lead. Ok, this only exceptional if they happen to be childhood firiends that happen to reunite or stay in touch. Other than that, it'll be more interesting to see who the second lead is as a person and some people may even fall in love with them. Show their flaws too because sometime making them too perfect breaks their charcter.
Friend-zone/Break-up. Ok, at some point someone has to be friend-zoned or broken up with. Someone and that choice is yours to make but you got ot have your base set up as to why it's happeneing. There's got to be a build up or it won't be as effective as you want it to be.
Love Confession or Realizing ML/SL is in love with the other. Ooo, this should and can go into the drama one but this is interesting all on its own. But trust, there's a reason I'm making its own bullet.
Ok, nothing is more dramatic and heartbreaking or pulls more at your heart strings than hearing in their confession of how they feel (not knowing the outcome) "You are the person I want the most in my life/I want by my side" or "Being your friend is more than enough for me" because they rather have main lead in their life than not at all.
Or even ML, after some time, reminiscing about the time spent together with SL and realizing they love SL, finally understanding why SL treats them the way they do and why ML themselves feels their chest ache when SL is around a potential lover. Stuff like that,,
Give me that love confession, and maybe a rejection/revealation even.
ANGST. Bestie, angst is like drama but it hurts not only the characters, but also your audience/readers. Give us SL reacting out of character for ML, give us ML rejecting SL or pushing them away, give us ML and LI content that is heartbreaking -- give us death!!!
Example:
"Why didn't you ever tell me...?"
"Because I see the way you look at him, and the way he looks at you...," Adam mutters, his eyes glued to the wall before him. His voice, though tired and raw, never failed to make your stomach churn, yet as you take in his beaten appearance, helaughs. A bitter, broken laugh."You look at him like he's your whole world and your eyes light up everytime you see him. It's like no one elese matters when he's around. And him? God, he looks at you like you're a walking dream, [Name]. Like your his everything and more. I-I've never seen my best friend so happy..."
"Adam-"
He cuts you off, finally looking at you. You didn't even notice you were crying until you saw his own tears, supsirsed to seeing the boy who acted like nothing mattered cry. "I love you, even though I shouldn't... A-And all I want is for you two to be happy, even if it hurts me seeing my best friend get the girl I love. I... As long as you are in my life, I don't mind..."
I think you get the gist right?
My tips are confusing but I heard that k-dramas are the best when it comes to second lead syndrome and watching how they utilize it is a good way to go if you're more of a viusal learner.
Now that I think about it, I probably just gave you an outline on how to write a novella romance...
Anyway, hope that helps a little and I can't wait to hear from you, bestie!!!
Not sure how to approach this without coming off as rude so I will do it in the only way I know how.
Anon, first of all, thank you for telling me that what my recent work is uncomfortable in the sense it sexualizes something as sacred as religion.
Second of all, I am sorry for causing that discomfort. I thought everyone had a somewhat distant, resentful relationship with religion like me. That was my mistake for projecting.
However, you can avoid the works that do sexulize religious imagery and I will try to avoid doing it in the future though, if that helps. Can't promise anything though.
