Say, can I ask you particularly what confused you about the backstory? Was it, like, a bad writing thing, or was it about the time travel mishap and the mental ghost? Sorry if I'm being annoying, I was just hoping the critique would be more thorough.
It was more so with the scientist suddenly coming to where she was and basically accepting her no questions asked other than with the ghosty side-kick.
You’re not being annoying, I’m just tired constantly














