#revisedpoem

[some-randomhumanbeing]

Wrote this definition poem about regret and formatted it like this for an interesting appeal. It's a revised version of one of my older poems.

[inkinthedusk]

Portico

The evening rays shaded across the portico,slowly it beaded for this fete like a bestow. Chancing by, it felt like I was braided to his hands of burly traits and hair looking so great. With a whistle of a classic on his lips, charmed my pulse skipped. This date I write about is so grand, will these words find its stand? Such zeal in those deep, pure eyes. Can a man be all that spiced? -Harsheeni Hanna

[sjbbball9]

Updates

Been revising and writing more poems as of recently.  Leave a note if you want me to share one of the revised ones with you tonight...if I get a good number of notes then I will also release a new poem. Also, if you’re on Facebook or Twitter you can follow me at www.facebook.com/sarahspoetry or @sarahspoetry1