Rewrite (of teaser)
"Please Edd!" Pat pleaded, his hands tightly gripped on either on of the large bots arms . Edd was frozen in a pose ready to strike Pat , but the siren refused to let that happen.
"Please ! Tell me what's wrong ! Why are you acting like this?!" Big globs of tears cascaded down Pat's cheeks , and his eyes were a dull shade of grey .
No response came from Edd . Pat could see nothing in the robots eyes , no hint of joy , no pity . Nothing . This wasn't Edd .
"E-Edd - " Pat sharply inhaled when Edd moved his arm , his fist slamming down on Pat's collar bone . A wail of pain quickly escaped the siren as he heard a few cracks come from the bone , causing Pat to let go of the other arm and get a heafty blow to the head and knock him over .
His shoulder smashed against the cement as he fell over , the skin quickly ripping open and blood starting to leak out. Despite the wound though Pat quicklg clampered onto his hands , but was pushed back against the ground when Edd placed his foot on Pat's back - threateningly close to Pat's dorsal fin .
"Edd. " A weak whimper came from Pat as tears continued to fall , looking up at Edd with fear in his eyes .
Instead of snapping the sirens spine Edd removed his foot , a flicker of something in his eyes . Though Pat did not look at Edd for long .
A bloodcurdling wail came from nearby , making Pat quicklg move his head. He didnt see who it was , but the wail sounded familiar . And the sea was turning red .
It took a second for the metallic smell of blood to hit his nose , making Pat launch himself into the water .
Where .
Where was he .
A familiar small figure could be seen at the floor of the sand , a cloud of blood rising from him.
"No ."
Pat's breath hitched . He went over to the mer , cupping his body into his hands.
"No . No no no no - " Pat shook his head as he stared , his body arching back up out of the water . Blood started to seep into his hands , and the wound on his shoulder started to bleed down his arm .
"Please ." His tear's grew worse , his iris' fully lost their color , and his soul turned a dark shade of blue .
after a second , Pat looked up to Edd, hunched over with his hands in front of him .
"I don't want to fight you anymore ."
A slightly confused glance came to Edd's eyes .
"Why ."
Pat Warily scooted back onto land , going over to Edd. Pat's body was shaking . He was scared . He was actually scared .
"I dont want to fight you ." Pat repeated in a broken voice, and a soft Norwegian scoff came from Tord.
"Why now ."
Pat glanced at who was in his hands .
Then , he rose then up , showing them to the robot .
Tord , who was currently controlling Edd , went pale .
He knew who that was .
That was Edd .