Gravity (3/?, WIP)
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gravity — chapter 3: registro (oscar pov)
oscar has been in rodellar for ten days and has opinions about everything except his own feelings, which he is filing under "no column for this yet"
what happens: a season-start party at el refugio where oscar stands at the same wall he always stands at and watches the entrance not produce lando for the entire night. daniel gives him handwritten field notes about surgencia's upper tier (visual only, no measurements, one anchor flagged with two question marks). rebecca decides she might be willing to revise her initial doubts. a british photographer sits next to kimi with a water bottle and an offer-not-an-assumption, and something in kimi's face does something oscar has never seen in ten days of shared canyon mornings.
the next morning: a vertical limestone wall, a caliper, and max belaying in silence while oscar stops breathing at a tufa formation and pretends this is about the light.
what oscar writes in his notebook margin: "context before comment." not ethics. not principle. a rule about delivery.
what oscar does not do: eat the figs.
chapter themes: the shape an absence makes / a man whose instruments work on everything except the thing that matters / "it doesn't feel significant. just a life with a fig tree and a shop counter that knows carlos's hands better than i do"
the stage is still listing two degrees toward stage right. no one fixes it.














