Round 2: Speech 2: Group Panel
Feedback from Teammates and Instructor
-clear thesis
-use more examples for certain points
-filler language
-starting sentences with “Um”
-label slides within the presentation (Showing who’s in the pictures)
-creative topic
-You did a good job in making your section unique from the other sections
My Own Feedback
-I repeated myself a few times (starting a sentence with the same phrase I used to end the previous sentence)
-I made a lot more eye contact this time
-I didn’t stay in one place, I walked around up to the audience
-The way I included my references, it felt choppy
Did My Speech Maintain My Attention
Answer: For the most part my speech did maintain my attention as I was intrigued to see how I elaborated all the information I got from the many hours of research on the topic. Yet what took a little of my attention away form my speech was that I was focusing to see when I would stutter or pronounce a word wrong due to my nerves.