When The Ocean Calls You
(Hong Joshua X FemReader)
*Rivalry/Enemies-to-Lovers, slow-burn, emotional tension, Coming-of-Age, Family Drama, emotional depth Surf Culture/Coastal Lifestyle, Social Class Divide Slow-Burn, Social Class Divide*
DISCLAIMER:
When the Ocean Calls You is an original story inspired by the Netflix series Surviving Summer. Like Surviving Summer, this story explores themes of teenage rivalry, friendship, family struggles, and the intense world of competitive surfing. The characters, plot, and events in When the Ocean Calls You are entirely fictional, created as a tribute to the spirit and atmosphere of the show.
This story is set in New South Wales, Australia, capturing the coastal lifestyle and surf culture that plays a central role in the characters’ lives. While SURVIVING SUMMER is set in Shorehaven beach!”
NOTE:
Hey everyone! I’m super excited to finally share the first episode of my original series When the Ocean Calls You. Y/N Marlowe (you) a self-made surfer from New South Wales, Australia and Joshua Hong, the privileged star from an elite surfing academy. It’s a story about family, friendship, and fighting for your place in the waves and in life. I poured a lot of heart into this, so I hope you feel the passion and tension from the very first page.
The salt hung thick in the air. The tide crashed violently, as if echoing the storm inside Y/N Marlowe.
She stood barefoot on the golden sands of New South Wales, her surfboard held like a sword, eyes trained on the water. Her sea-tossed braid swung over her shoulder part habit, part armor.
“Marlon!” she called out sharply.
Her older brother and squad coach turned from where he was setting up the flags.
“You’re late,” he said with a smirk.
She raised a brow, “Was early enough to beat Avalon here.”
Behind her, the New South Wales Squad gathered like a storm of sunburnt limbs and fearless hearts.
There was Hayley, the Brooklyn-born firecracker who could wipe out and laugh like it was comedy. Bodhi, strong, silent, and focused. Emma, brainy with the sharpest read of waves. Matthew, always cracking jokes, even while carving 360s. Austin, a tactical surfer who never backed down from a reef break.
Their training wasn’t polished. Their gear wasn’t sponsored. But what they had was raw skill, natural rhythm with the ocean, and grit that no money could buy.
That’s what made them dangerous.
That’s what made Avalon Academy nervous.
A sleek, black van pulled up, sparkling clean, with tinted windows and elite surfboards stacked like trophies. From it emerged the wave of rich, perfectly trained Avalon elites surfing’s private-school mafia.
Leading them was Joshua Hong.
Korean-American. Born in LA, trained in Hawaii, and molded into Avalon’s golden boy. Sharp. Intense. Controlled. And Y/N’s sworn enemy since she was twelve.
“Y/N Marlowe,” he called out, a smirk on his face. “Still surfing like your board’s too big for you?”
Y/N’s eye twitched.
“Joshua,” she responded coolly. “Still wearing wetsuits like you’re scared of the water.”
Behind him, the Avalon squad fanned out like shadows.
Vernon, sarcastic and too smart for his own good. Mingyu, towering and intimidating but loyal to his team. Yena, bold and strategic, never without a biting remark. Eunji, clean-cut and precise, a wave-slicing machine. Mae, unreadable and always ten moves ahead. And Wonwoo, the quiet genius who surfed like poetry.
The tension between the squads wasn’t new.
It was war, every year.
TRAINING TIME — NEW SOUTH WALES SIDE
Marlon clapped his hands to get their attention.
“Listen up. Avalon’s here early, which means they’re prepping harder than usual. You know what that means.”
“Trial season,” Hayley groaned.
“Yup,” Marlon said. “And this year’s the one. New format. New rules. No second chances.”
Matthew raised a hand. “What if we just break their boards?”
“Might be illegal,” Emma muttered. “Sadly.”
Y/N rolled her shoulders and walked toward the ocean. The sea called her like a second home no drama, no rivalry. Just rhythm.
But before she could paddle out...
Joshua stepped onto the waterline.
She paused.
He paused.
Then, without a word, both charged into the waves.
They cut through the water like two rival storms carving, duck-diving, snapping turns like they were born for this. Each trying to outmaneuver the other. Each trying not to notice how easily they danced around the same swell.
The others watched from the beach New South Wales on one side, Avalon on the other as their leaders battled silently in the surf.
Marlon narrowed his eyes.
“Why does it always have to be them?” he muttered.
BONFIRE NIGHT
As the sun dipped below the horizon, New South Wales lit a bonfire. It was tradition salt in the air, fire on the sand, stories that softened rivalry into family.
Y/N sat cross-legged, watching the flames crackle. Hayley passed her a can of soda.
“Thought you were gonna punch Joshua mid-turn,” she joked.
“I was considering throwing my board at his face,” Y/N muttered.
“But you didn’t,” Hayley said. “Because deep down, you wanna beat him fair.”
Y/N didn’t answer.
Because maybe, somewhere inside, Hayley was right.
FLASHBACK: AGE 12, AVALON BEACH
Y/N had wandered onto Avalon’s private training beach with her hand-me-down board, hopeful and wide-eyed.
Joshua had seen her.
“You shouldn’t be here,” he’d said, voice already sharp.
“Why? The ocean’s free.”
“Not this part.”
He didn’t smile. He didn’t help. And when she fell trying to copy his cutback he laughed.
That laugh burned into her forever.
The next morning, the Surf Australia Trials Director arrived in aviators and a clipboard. Everyone Avalon and New South Wales gathered around.
“New format for this year’s national Trials,” she announced. “Two squads. Mixed pairs. One Avalon. One New South Wales. You’ll be partnered and judged together.”
Gasps. Protests.
“That’s insane!” “We can’t work with them.” “Is this punishment?!”
Marlon stepped forward. “Coach Marlowe here. With all due respect, how do we expect them to collaborate when they’ve been raised on rivalry?” The director didn’t flinch. “Because that’s surfing. Conditions change. Teammates shift. Life doesn’t ask who you like.”
The list was taped to the board. Everyone surged forward. Y/N shoved through the crowd, heart thudding. She found her name.
Y/N Marlowe – Joshua Hong
The words hit like a wipeout. Joshua appeared beside her. “This is a joke, right?”
“I wish.”
Their gazes met ten years of rivalry between them. Now they were on the same team. Y/N turned and walked away. Joshua didn’t stop her. But deep down, they both knew: The ocean didn’t care about enemies.
Only survival.
The wind howled through the coastal trees. A battered white van pulled up outside a rustic surf lodge tucked between towering cliffs and choppy tides. A faded wooden sign read: “OFFICIAL TRIALS PREP CAMP — NO SIGNAL, NO COMFORTS, JUST WAVES.”
Y/N stepped out, hoodie up, board strapped to her back.
Right behind her, a sleek Avalon SUV rolled up. And, like a plot twist she already hated, out stepped Joshua, calm and polished in his sponsor-branded gear. They locked eyes.
“Kill me now,” Y/N muttered.
“Glad we’re on the same page,” Joshua replied smoothly.
The lodge had been split in two dorms: Avalon and NSW mixed. Unbelievable.
Y/N dropped her duffel next to Hayley’s bunk. Emma, Bodhi, and Matthew were already claiming beds. Hayley was filming the chaos on her cracked phone.
“Room with your nemesis. That’s some reality TV stuff,” she grinned.
Y/N flopped onto the mattress. “This is my nightmare.”
Just then, a second door opened.
Joshua stepped in, followed by Vernon, Mingyu, Mae, and of course Wonwoo.
“You’ve got to be joking,” Y/N said.
“Oh, we’re bunkmates?” Joshua deadpanned. “Try not to cry.”
Hayley smirked. “This is gonna be so fun.”
-COACHES ROOM-
Marlon paced.
“They’re going to kill each other,” he said, hands on his hips.
The Trials Director, Ms. Clarke, didn’t look concerned. “Or they’ll become the strongest pair on the coast. You’ve seen the footage. Together, they read waves like twins.”
Marlon scoffed. “They hate each other.”
“Perfect,” Clarke said. “Sometimes the ocean puts the wrong people on the same wave... and something genius happens.”
The sun was scorching. The tide rising. The judges set up cameras and buzzers.
“Paired heats start now!” a coach announced. “NSW and Avalon mixed. You’ll compete as duos. Timing, chemistry, communication. Let’s see if you can work with your rivals.”
Pairs were called.
Emma was paired with Vernon. Hayley with Yena (instant chaos). Matthew with Eunji. Austin with Mae.
And finally...
“Y/N Marlowe and Joshua Hong —heat 4. You’re up.”
Y/N adjusted her leash, jaw tight. “Don’t screw this up.”
Joshua raised a brow. “Just follow my lead.”
She scoffed. “In your dreams.”
They paddled out in silence. The waves were rougher today. Unforgiving.
From the shore, all eyes watched. Even Marlon had gone quiet.
Joshua and Y/N hovered, waiting. Then a perfect set rolled in.
Joshua started first, riding the clean right break. His lines were sharp, polished.
Y/N caught the left bold, unpredictable, her body moving with a rhythm no school could teach.
Then came the joint wave. Two riders. One swell.
They launched into it like enemies racing to survive.
And for the first time they synced.
Her spin met his cutback. His aerial opened into her reverse turn. A perfectly timed crossover that left the coaches speechless.
They rode the wave until it died in perfect silence before dropping off the side and floating on their backs, panting.
“Holy crap,” Y/N muttered.
“That was... terrifying,” Joshua said.
She laughed. Just once. And for a brief moment, it wasn't war.
That night, as the sky turned navy, everyone gathered around a campfire again.
Hayley roasted marshmallows next to Y/N.
“You looked like you actually... liked him out there,” she teased.
“I did not.”
“You didn’t hate him.”
“Okay maybe I a little didn’t hate him.”
Meanwhile, on the other side of the circle, Joshua sat near Vernon and Mae, watching the firelight flicker against Y/N’s face.
“She’s not terrible,” he muttered.
Mae raised an eyebrow. “You’re in trouble.”
Vernon sipped his water. “This is either the start of peace… or the start of war 2.0.”
SCENE 7 — FLASHBACK (JOSHUA’S POV)
Joshua was 14. Avalon’s prized rookie. Training in the icy waters of Victoria.
He’d seen Y/N again at a comp.
She wiped out hard. Board snapped.
He remembered standing there, frozen, watching her get back up alone.
No sponsor. No team rushing over.
But she paddled back in like nothing happened.
That image never left him.
Later that night, Y/N snuck outside, the sea whispering her name. She needed air.
Joshua followed, silent. They stood beside the dark ocean, moonlight glimmering on the waves.
“Why do you surf?” she asked suddenly.
He hesitated. “Because it’s the only time I’m not pretending to be perfect.”
She nodded.
“I surf because the water doesn’t care who I am.”
They didn’t look at each other. But something shifted.
It wasn’t peace.
But it wasn’t war either.
Not anymore.
The next morning, Marlon scanned the performance charts.
Y/N and Joshua: Highest score in the first heats.
He frowned. “This is either a miracle... or a disaster waiting to happen.”
What nobody knows yet... Is that Avalon’s director is secretly manipulating the mixed team results, wanting Joshua to sabotage the pair so Avalon reclaims the title. But Joshua isn’t sure anymore.
Because for the first time in his life...
Y/N doesn’t feel like the enemy.
And the ocean?
It’s starting to call them together.
Y/N sipped on a juice box, legs crossed on the dusty beanbag. Her laptop balanced on her knees, camera gear laid out beside her.
Y/N: “Hey Marlon! Can you help me shoot a docu-style thing? Like... my journey here. It could be cool for sponsors and stuff.”
Marlon was already halfway out the door, whistle around his neck and clipboard in hand.
MARLON: “I can’t. I’ve got four back-to-back trainings and the juniors coming in for beginners’ class. Ask Alex.”
Y/N: “He said he’s got a meeting with his dumb crypto friends.”
Marlon answered: “Then find someone else, I’m swamped.”
Y/N: “Cool. Yeah. Sure.” *she says quietly, slightly disappointed.
The tide was gentle. Sky a pale blue. Waves smooth as silk.
Hayley, camera in hand, stood knee-deep in the sand, filming Y/N paddling out.
Hayley (behind the camera): “Alright, you doing great!”
Y/N flashed her a grin and sprinted into the water.
As Hayley adjusted the camera, someone stepped up beside her.
Marlon: “So... she asked you?”
Hayley didn’t flinch.
Hayley: “Well, you were busy. So yeah.” Marlon crossed his arms, watching his sister slice through the water like it was her second skin. “Mom always said she’d be a great surfer.” He said.
“She was always the optimist.” He chuckled. “It drove her mad.” Hayley glanced at him.
Marlon moved away, Hayley never stopped the recording.
Back in the water, Y/N was already carving through a wave, her laughter echoing over the surf.
Back in their Crib, next to the ocean.
Y/N was editing the clips, headphones on.
A soft smile formed as she watched herself catch her third clean barrel of the day. Then Marlon voice came through:
“She was always the optimist…It drove her mad.”
Y/N paused.
Rewinded. Played again.
And again.
The smile faded.
Y/N stormed out of her room, socks skidding across the floor. Marlon and Alex were watching a docuseries on shark migration.
“OI. I’m not doing beginners’ class tomorrow.”
Marlon “Wait, what? What do you mean?!”
Y/N: “I said I’m not showing up. Tell the kids to paddle around each other.”
“What the hell, Y/N?! You always do this! Every time we rely on you, you flake. It’s in one ear and out the other!”
“Why do you even want me there when you clearly think I’m not even that good?!” That was her last straw! “What?! Y/N Where did you get that from?”
“She was always the optimist.” *she imitated him.
Silence. “...No. No, Y/N. I wasn’t talking about you. I was talking about Mom. Our mother. To Hayley. You are great.”
A beat. Y/N’s jaw clenched. Voice dropped.
Y/N: “When Mom was sick… you weren’t there. Neither of you.”
She turned to look at her older brother Alex, scrolling on his phone. “Ooooh, this looks heated.” Alex said Raising his hands to the air. “I’m gonna get some popcorn. Bye.”
He walked out.
Y/N glared after him, then locked eyes with Marlon. “You left. You were both gone. She and I we were fine! Just us. That’s all we needed.”
“Y/N…”
But she was already grabbing her jacket and slamming the front door behind her.
Y/N sat on the sand, knees hugged to her chest.
The moon lit the sea like silver glass.
In the distance, waves whispered memories. Her and her mom dancing barefoot in the water. Her mom brushing the salt from her hair. Her mom saying, “You’ve got the ocean in your blood, baby girl.”
Tears welled up.
She wiped them fast.
Marlon sat on his bed, shoulders heavy. He opened a drawer and pulled out a photo:
Y/N at 11, grinning, standing next to their mom, holding her first surfboard. On the back, scribbled in faded ink:
"She’ll be better than all of us. Watch her fly. – Mom"
He sighed. Regret painting every inch of his face.
Next morning, surf lodge kitchen
Rain taps against the windows, soft and steady. The air smells like toast and ocean wind.
Hayley stirs a mug of tea in silence. She glances at the clock on the wall. 7:42 AM. Still no sign of y/n.
Marlon walks in, hair messy from a rough night’s sleep, hoodie thrown over his head. He looks exhausted.
Hayley hands him a mug without a word. He takes it, murmurs, “thanks.”
Hayley leans on the counter, watching the grey sky through the window.
"she didn’t come back last night," she says finally.
Marlon doesn’t respond. Just presses his thumb against the warm ceramic like he’s grounding himself.
Hayley turns to him, voice softer now.
“you okay?”
He doesn’t look up. “i don’t know.”
She waits. And when he doesn’t speak, she does.
“she’s right, you know. about everything.”
He tenses. But hayley doesn’t flinch.
“you weren’t there. neither was alex. you both left her.”
Marlon finally looks at her, guilt in his eyes.
"i couldn’t do it, hayley. i couldn’t watch mum disappear like that. i thought if i focused on coaching, on making the squad better… it would numb it."
"it numbed *you*," hayley says, "but not her."
The tide is low.
y/n sits curled up at the edge of a hidden cove, a place only she and her mum used to visit. It’s quiet here. Peaceful. But today, even the waves sound sad.
She scrolls through her phone, watching the clip again.
"she was always the optimist."
"it drove her mad."
She exhales sharply and tosses her phone into the sand. It doesn’t break just lies there, face-down like it’s tired too.
Footsteps crunch behind her. “thought i might find you here.” y/n doesn’t turn around. Marlon steps beside her slowly, unsure if he’s welcome.
“mum used to bring you here after school,” he says quietly.
“yeah. said it was our secret.”
“she never brought me,” he admits.
y/n shrugs. “maybe she knew you’d leave.” the words sting. marlon winces.
“I deserved that.”
silence.
He sits down beside her, not too close. Just enough.
“I didn’t mean what you think I meant, y/n,” he says, voice raw. “when I said ‘she was the optimist’... I was talking about mum. not you.”
y/n doesn’t say anything.
“you’re not like her,” he continues. “you’re better. braver.”
She finally turns to him, eyes full of unshed tears.
“then why did you leave me?”
marlon swallows hard. “because i was scared. because i thought being strong meant ignoring pain. i thought... i thought if i didn’t look back, i wouldn’t break.”
“well i did break,” she says quietly. “and no one noticed.”
he reaches out, slowly. “i notice now. y/n looks at his hand for a long moment and then, finally, takes it.
later that night, surf lodge living room
the rain hasn’t stopped. thunder rumbles far away, soft like a memory.
y/n sits with a blanket over her shoulders, hair still damp from the walk back.
alex walks in with a bowl of popcorn.
“so, you made up with mum junior?” he says, plopping onto the couch.
“shut up,” y/n mutters.
marlon enters behind her, dropping onto the armrest with a groan.
“if you’re not gonna help with beginners class tomorrow, at least take over afternoon drills.”
y/n smirks. “so now you want me there?”
“always did,” he says. “just didn’t say it enough.”
alex throws a popcorn kernel at both of them. “group therapy is cute and all but let’s watch a movie.”
“only if it’s not one of your weird sci-fi thrillers,” y/n warns.
“deal.”
They press play. For a while, it’s just the sound of the storm and the quiet hum of the TV.
And for the first time in a long time, things feel... okay.
The beach is buzzing with excitement. The first major local comp of the season. Vendors setting up, sponsors hanging banners, kids from all over New South Wales checking in. The waves? Perfect.
y/n stands near the registration tent with hayley, emma, matthew, bodhi, and austin. The self-made squad.
On the other side of the tent: joshua and his crew Vernon, Mingyu,Yena, Eunji, Mae, and Wonwoo. The elite academy kids. Every one of them in matching wetsuits with their academy logo stitched in gold.
y/n spots them and rolls her eyes.
“they all look like they shower in arrogance,” Emma mutters.
"or money," Bodhi adds, smirking.
Hayley leans closer to y/n. “just beat him this time, okay?”
y/n squints toward joshua, who’s already staring her down. His arms are crossed. Eyes sharp.
"watch me."
Joshua’s stretching near the rocks when y/n walks past. he doesn’t even try to hide the glare.
“you ready to choke again like last comp?” he throws casually.
y/n pauses, smirks. “you mean the one you won cause your coach manipulated the heats?”
Joshua snorts. “keep telling yourself that, sweetheart.”
“don’t call me that.”
“touchy.” y/n steps closer, just enough to make his jaw tense.
“you might be rich, Joshua, but out here?” she jerks her chin toward the ocean. “it’s not about money. it’s about guts.” he leans in, voice dropping.
“and you don’t have enough of them.” they stare at each other. fire. pure fire. Matthew calls her name from across the sand.
“good luck out there,” Joshua says with a fake smile. “you’ll need it.”
the crowd cheers as the surfers paddle out. water sprays, the horn blares. y/n, joshua, and two other local surfers are in the same heat.
y/n paddles fast, carving waves with sharp precision. joshua follows, smooth but technical. The judges are watching closely.
each time y/n catches a clean ride, joshua pushes harder. more aggressive. more determined. it's like they’re dancing, but with knives.
they’re not just surfing. they’re trying to break each other.
on the final wave of the heat, they both go for it. the same wave. shoulder to shoulder.
“back off!” y/n yells.
joshua doesn’t.
they collide.
the judges blow the horn. whistles go off. the crowd gasps.
they both tumble hard into the water, boards tangled.
back on shore, their coaches are yelling at the judges. y/n storms out of the water, pulling her leash off.
Marlon jogs up, furious. “what the hell happened?!”
“he cut me off!” y/n shouts, wringing water from her hair.
on the other side, Joshua’s coach is ranting about “reckless amateurs.”
Vernon is trying to hold joshua back. “you’re gonna get penalized if you keep mouthing off, man.”
Mingyu adds, “she’s in your head.”
Joshua scowls. “she’s been in my head since always.”
it’s quiet. too quiet.
y/n rewatches footage hayley filmed of the heat. the tension. the fall. the looks.
a comment notification pops up on the screen.
“they’ve always had beef. maybe it’s love-hate 👀”
y/n groans. “absolutely not.”
but Hayley, standing behind her, just smirks.
“you sure?”
Episode 1.













