sixwordsrp
First off, I really dig your theme. It’s such a nice choice for gradientless graphics so good job with that. I have mixed feelings about the PSD you chose since I’m use to the brighter ones, but this one still looks nice just awkward. That may just be me though so don’t worry. The graphics are really simple, but nicely done. My only recommendations would be to slow down the header because it’s a tad bit too fast and to make the description text darker. Moving onto the navigation, it’s nice and organized. I feel like the second blockquote really isn’t needed, but it doesn’t really change anything if it’s there or not. Your header is simple, but some of the simplest things can look nice. In this case, it does. I’m so glad you have a few cute little extra pages like the prompts and around town page. I’m really glad you added a trigger warning page before your characters. It’s just a really grand idea, honestly. You also have a pretty nice range of FCs. I just squeal anytime I see a Taissa or Shereen in a roleplay, honestly. Just looking at the little phrases on the graphics, I am already digging it. I read through a few characters as well and the ones I read were pretty nicely written. Your characters are just great, okay. Last but not least your plot. I never see roleplays take place in New Zealand so great location choice. There isn’t really anything special with the plot, but it is nicely written. I would recommend having a plot summary though. Overall, this roleplay seems like it has lots of potential and it’s made it’s way into my rec tag for the amazing characters. Good luck sunshines and I’m wishing you the best of luck.
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