Here's what I would change in that first episode of mine:
First of all, change in how Susan looks during transformation. Granted, this part of the video is basically my comic animated, and in the comic Susan apears only in her low-shadow form, but I think it would work better if drew her in her full-shadow form here
Second of all, I think Susie is a biiit too comfortable around Wilson when they first meet. As much as I like the scene where he helps her up, I don't think Susan would be so chill about it - she is lowkey afraid of new people. Like, it doesn't feel like her + I want them to have more of a strangers vibe there. I would get rid of that physical touch in that scene. + It would make scene where Susan hesitates to shake his hand make more sense