For the ask game:
3. Something you wish a commenter had called attention to, but got ignored.
4. Something you hate to see in smut.
5. Something you love to see in smut.
3. this doesn't count since she did eventually but until last week no one noticed the numberwang reference in my yuletide fic.
4. outside of the normal bad writing, I really hate when the build up to the kiss is absolutely outstanding, and the moment of the kiss is incredible...and then the sex is boring, devoid of emotion.
5. I LOVE smutty banter, its really what does it for me. Polite sexual heckling.












