Please Use Standard English
These were the recommendations sent to us regarding a student's Academic Validation Project (AVP) which is used when the student is having difficulty passing the state tests.
Now, I went to the grading of these exams and have therefore seen the rubrics and to say that I was livid about this is an understatement. While many of them came back from grammar, that specific sentence as the main point of that persons requested revisions definitely caught me where it hurts.
1) The rubric does not mention anything about grammar other than "errors that interfere with meaning." The stories all made sense. I know, because I read them and so did other teachers. At the end of the day, we are using holistic scoring so even if that was the case, that should not have been the whole project being returned. I also know because I scored some of the projects including those that did not use standard English and only sent back those that did not have the modifiers as requested since that was the skill being tested.
2) They were writing narratives. If the student chose for this to be his style, maybe that was intentional. It wasn't, but suppose it was. Plenty of authors have used run-on sentences, no punctuation, and no capital letters and they are famous!
3) The point of the project was to demonstrate mastery about modifiers (use of single and phrase modifiers). The project demonstrated that. What's the problem?
4) (While this shouldn't have been an issue in the first place) if nothing else, most of the projects were sent with the students IEPs attached to them! And you want to send them back for the grammar even though they mastered the concept!
I have never seen anything so petty in my life. Don't get me wrong; I think grammar is important but when most schools no longer teach it, how are students supposed to learn and keep up with it. And there is also a time and place for the grammar to take center stage. Based upon the rubric provided by the state, this was not that time!
Beyond the grammar, there were some comments about the answers that the students had. They were marked wrong for answers that other students had as well. It may not have been worded the same but the keywords needed were all there!
I just don't understand how this is the process! People want to talk about differentiation and everything else under the sun for individualizing education and incorporating culture but the moment someone uses AAVE they are told that it is unacceptable and they are not "standard."
I also think that in terms of alternative schools, you spend all of this time making sure that we don't grade projects from our own schools, but do nothing to ensure that graders don't get students that they may have had at their schools last year who set their classrooms on fire! I'm not saying that's the case here, but it does also make you wonder.
Either way, I am thoroughly upset by this entire process and just needed to get it down somewhere. If you think I'm being unreasonable, please chime in.
If you didn't read it all, the main point is I understand the value of what they were suggesting about the importance of grammar, but at the end of the day, your rubric is your guiding tool and you cannot go against that.