Visum Crossed out EP1
Hey all its Jake.
Welcome to the first installment of Visum crossed out. In this series i will be releasing Project ideas and story arcs that were scrapped because we either did not have enough time or it did not fit the story format.
(Please Note: all of these are rough draft ideas that may come back in the future.)
There is truly never enough time and space to make a serious Studio Time’s script. While it was a fun idea to have a very simple NY times style joke in a full page 5 - 6 Panel format. i truly wanted more from each character. Think rooster teeth animated meets a soap opera. The story arc that i loved the most and still want to see succeed in a similar fashion to this is Gale and Jake. Both these characters are a little at odds with each other, even through out the current series, and it is truly not that hard to see why. but I’m rambling now so lets get into the start of this arc.
Gale walks into the conference room, closing the door. She leans up against it with a heavy sigh.
Gale: “Thank Christ”
The room is crested with late sunlight. The meeting table, full of notes and debris.
Gale thinks to herself: “I'm sure Autumn will be fine.. just for a few minutes”
Gale goes to check her phone seeing the time is 4:45
Gale: “Humm”
Gale puts away her phone and walks over to the window where she looks out at the city below.
Gale sighs closing the blinds.
A Clicking sound and coughing comes from the other side of the room breaking the silence
Gale turns around at first shocked
Gale goes to investigate
*move the camera to in front of Jake under the conference table, in the background show Gale approaching the sound.*
(Jake looks disheveled and upset, With a blunt in his mouth, looking at a photograph with tear stains and bags under his eyes)
Gale sits on the table spinning around and hanging her feet down in front of him
(a couple of notes could slide onto the ground.)
Jake is frightened and jumps up bashing his head in into the table and dropping his smoke into his lap and the photo on the floor
Gale taps her fingers along the top of the table holding a face that is very unamused and stern
Jake rubs the back of his head in pain.
Gale: “And what do you think you’re doing Mr Green?
Jake coughs uncontrollably
In between coughs Jake responds: “Don’t... Scare... me... like”
Jake sputters as the hand rolled blunt burns away at his clothes and hits skin
Jake: “YE-OUCH!”
Jake throws it forward jumping and hitting his head against the table again.
Gale looks down at the blunt and sighs
Gale jumps of the table and brings her foot down on the Blunt, Snuffing it out
Gale looks down at the now in pain Jake, as he holds his head rocking back and forth.
Gale: “Mr. green that is highly unprofessional in the work place!”
Jake groans: “No one is working in here though”
Gale folds her arms and taps her foot
Gale: “Do not get smart with me”
Gale: “Smoking is prohibited in the building that includes the whole office!”
Jake: “its my office though!”
Jake scrambles off the floor and stands up brushing himself off.
Jake: “Besides we are about to close, it wont effect work”
Gale unfolds her arms and rolls her eyes
Gale: “Open a window, Get some water”
Gale looks Jake straight in the eyes
Gale: “and for the love of god get some fresh air.”
Jake wipes his face and hangs his head
Jake “Yes ma’am”
Jake walks over to the window and throws it open
Gale lifts her foot and bends down to pick up the blunt
Gale notices the photograph Jake was looking at
*Its an image of Jake and Autumn looking at the camera both look really happy as they hold each other lovingly*
Gale grabs the photo and instinctually tries to rip it up.
Gale looks at the image however and stops leaving only a rip at the top of the photo.
Gale grabs the blunt and walks over to Jake
*camera shows both of them from a fixed position looking out the window*
Gale flicks the blunt out the window making sure Jake watches
Gale: “If i catch you doing that again i will not be as forgiving”
Jake hangs his head: “Yes Ma’am”
Gales turns to Jake and hands him the photo upside down
Gale: “And i believe this belongs to you sir”
Jake grabs it, face going red and flustered
Jake begins blabbering: “I'm so sorry i know the cour”
Gale turns around cutting him off
Gale: “Like i said Mr green it belongs to you”
Gale says more quietly: “And only you”
Gale walks to the door and looks back at the Jake empathetically
Gale: “Get some rest Mr. Green, I will see you tomorrow”
I hope you all enjoyed this. Let me know if this is something you want to see more of in the future. Thank you for reading. = )