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Full review for savethiscity-rp | RECCOMENDED

Disclaimer: My knowledge of DC is limited to movies and a few comics here and there, this review will be solely based on my knowledge of rps.  

First thing I notice:

Can I say how much I really love your theme? While I usually tell roleplay to have more colors in their schemes, this one fits perfectly. It's simple and clean as is the description. And you have a plotting board! I'm very excited to see what's beyond the first page.

Aesthetic

While the color scheme and theme are fine just the way they are, I would consider changing the header. It doesn't really match at all with the rest of the colors, not even has the same font. I really recommend changing it.

Plot

First of all, the seasons idea is so great, it feels like your writing a television show. I love how the plot has developed and I feel like you're gearing up to a huge climax (season 3 maybe?) but I can't seem to find the plot for season one? Is it in the Gotham Timeline (which is awesome by the way). It seems the plot has been strong enough to make TWO news and gossip blogs, a MAFIA OVERVIEW. One complaint, the "previously" tag is great, but maybe you could add it all to one page? Just a suggestion here, its not that necessary.

Bios/Characters

One thing that irks me about roleplays is that they include one or two poc fcs and a gay guy and pass it off as diversity. You guys didn't do that. In fact, you guy almost have more poc than white people in your rp, and a lot of different ethnicity and races to boot! As an rph, this is like heaven. The bios aren't extremely long but they give just enough information for you to develop your character, and your graphics are very simple, clean and well made!

Admin

The first thing I noticed is that the players seem so immersed in the roleplay and the admins! You even post relevant quotes from the players to the main, it feels so inviting and warm. I like how you, the admins, manage to sound professional yet so welcome to new players. I have absolutely no complaints, the roleplay seems very well thought out.

Rating

FIVE OUR OF FIVE. The complaints I made are just about the aesthetic, I'm actually surprised you don't have more players. This rp deserves a lot more. I'm in awe. If only I had more time I would join as static.... sighs. 

What you need to change the most

Header for main

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Full Review for Themeltingpot-rpg 

First thing I notice:

The first thing I noted is that the main is very organized with accessible links and a simple theme. While its a pretty common theme for RP's now, its one of my favorites and, so far, I think it works pretty well with the rp. I'm so glad you stated that the RP includes POC and that its a safe place, those two things are severely lacking in the RP community. The description grabs your attention, but it wouldn't hurt to add something else to it.

Aesthetic

Again, its a simple theme and I fear that you can't do much with it. The graphics are, in one word, adorable. I like that it includes little pictures that have to do with the characters! One thing I'd like to say is that maybe the main could use a bit more colors. No offense, but its a bit dull. 

Plot

I've never seen a band-based RP before, and I've been in the community for four years! The plot was captivating, and I'm glad that you included the history of the club. But I think the part I most enjoyed was the band info page. Like, HOLY SHIT, I'm in love with the bands already, especially with all the girl bands. Its a really interesting way to see how the band members interact with their own group and others. Super original plot, I have absolutely no problems. Except.... Maybe some more variety of bands in the future? Some folk? Rap? You get the idea. 

Bios/Characters

YOU GUYS ARE FUCKING BLOWING ME AWAY. Literally 90% of the fcs are underused (YAY!) and I'm pretty sure there are more POC fcs than white (bows down). I am so so happy with the fc choices. I can't stress enough how much I love that you included their most played songs (I need to listen to some of them now). Another thing that I love is that you included every part of what being a singer is, such as journalists and make up artists as well as the bar staff. The drug dealer thing was a bit unexpected, but not unappreciated. 

One thing thought: Your character, Carly Rose, does not clasify as non-binary. She identifies as female and belongs in the female section, and while I applaud you for including a trans female character, I'd like to see some non-binary characters. Non-Binary people use pronouns that aren't he/she, the most common being they or ze. If you need any help creating a nb character, don't hesitate to ask!

Admin

From what I've see, the admins look really invested in the rp and, from what I see in the activity, it seems that you're on almost every day. I love it when they include writing tasks in roleplays! I'm also glad that you inlcuded a trigger page and a playlist account. So far, everything looks fab.

Rating

5 OUT OF 5. Congrats on being one of the most original roleplays I've seen out there!

What you need to change the most

Carly Rose Bio

More color to the main

Modify description

More types of genres in the future.

I wish you the best of luck!