My character has severe claustrophobia and freaks out when she hears loud noises. So to torture her, her captors are just keeping her in a very small room (6x6x6) and making sure there’s constantly loud noises around such as yelling, machinery, etc. They then say that they didn’t actually do anything bc they didn’t actively hurt her. My questions are 1. Would this even be torture? 2. Is this problematic in the way I portray torture? She’ll have insomnia, panic attacks, auditory hallucinations.
Thiswould certainly be torture and it would actively hurt her but- yesthere is a problematic element here.
Essentiallytorturers have no way of knowing a victim’s phobias in advance.Because of the way torture destroys an organisation’s capacity forcollecting accurate information the chances of torturers finding outsomething like this is virtually impossible. And this kind ofscenario, where a victim’s deepest fears are specificallytargetted, is often used to portray torturers as much more competentthen they are in reality.
Ithink there are a couple of ways you could eliminate that element inyour story so that you could still use this scenario.
Thesimplest way is this: the tortures are not targetted specifically atthis one victim. Every person the torturers abuse is treated thisway. This character is just unlucky enough to be particularlyvulnerable to these tortures.
Themore complicated way is to devise a scenario that will let thetorturers find out about the character’s phobias after she’scaptured. If you think the character is naive enough to beg them notto do these specific things to her when she’s threatened withtorture- that could work.
OtherwiseI’d suggest creating a scenario that lets the torturers see she’sbadly effected by loud noise. And another that lets them see she’sbadly effected by confined spaces. These scenarios would have to beincredibly, blindingly obvious.
Personally?I would favour the first scenario and the idea these torturers treateveryone this way.
It’smore realistic and it avoids any chance of suggesting that this is‘less damaging’ or only bad because the character has thesephobias. If the torturers do this to everyone that means they expecteveryone to be hurt by this kind of abuse. Which neatly avoids thesuggestion that this is somehow ‘harmless’.
Attackslike this would usually involve locking someone in a ‘box’ for anextended period of time. Which could be anything from around 10 hoursto 48 hours.
Thiswas especially common with police torture in many different countries(it’s most extensively studied in the US) and a lot of old jailsactually had specially built ‘rooms’ for this. They were oftentoo small to sit or lie down in and were sometimes right next to thebuilding’s boiler, making them incredibly hot.
Theseare actually several tortures happening simultaneously.
Thefirst is something a bit like a restraint torture: the victim insidethe ‘box’ has enough freedom of movement that they’re not in astress position but their movement is sufficiently reduced thatthey’re constantly uncomfortable and in pain. The second is atemperature torture caused by the heat from the boiler. The third issleep deprivation caused by the dimensions of the box, thetemperature and the noise from the boiler.
Thiswas all often combined with starvation, dehydration and inadequatehygiene facilities.
Thecell in your scenario is big enough that this isn’t a positionaltorture. But the noisy machinery means that it isgoing to cause sleep deprivation and it could be a temperaturetorture as well. If the roomis very close to the machinery and it’s large machinery there’s agood chance the room would heat up while the machinery is running.
Ina cramped space that sort of heat can get trapped. The room canquickly become painfully hot and stuffy.
Atthe very least I’d expect a normal person to develop an awfulheadache within an hour of being locked in this sort of room.
Ifthe room is hot and they’re not given water then I’d expect someof the symptoms of dehydration to be apparent: headaches, confusion,dizziness, pain and tiredness. If the character was kept there foranything up to 12 hours I think symptoms of sleep deprivation wouldbe likely as well.
Thephysical symptoms include shakes, headaches, muscular pain, poorreaction times, poor coordination, poor reflexes and a higher chanceof accidents. That combines with confusion, memory loss, reducedconcentration, reduced ability to recognise other people’semotions, an assumption other people are hostile, difficultremembering new information, and impairments to logic, creativity,planning and problem solving.
Theseare tortures. They’re incredibly common ones. And the fact they’re‘clean’ (non scarring) tortures means they’re often incrediblydifficult to prove.As a result survivors of these kinds of tortures are often denied services and a chance at justice.
Cellslike the one you described aren’t used often any more because thecell itself is obvious. But the same tortures are still being used,the method is the only thing that’s changed.
Thisis torture. It’sincredibly painful and damaging. That would apply to anyone, not justa character with these specific phobias.
Givingyour character insomnia and panic attacks in the long term seemsplausible to me. They’re both common long term symptoms.
Ithink you should try reading some of @scripttraumasurvivors’s blogbefore committing to auditory hallucinations as a long term symptom.Some survivors with PTSD do hallucinate but not every one does andhallucinations are often portrayed very badly in fiction. It’sworth taking the time to read up on them before deciding if that’sa symptom you want to use long term.
Inthe short term sleep deprivation can cause hallucinations, includingauditory hallucinations. However this would be unusual if thecharacter had been in sleep deprived for less then 24 hours. (Acharacter who hadn’t been getting enough sleep before beingconfined could start hallucinating sooner).
Ihope this helps. :)
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