Hello, I hope you're having a good day/night. Talenthunthq is a brand new hollywood based skeleton roleplay that just opened today and we were wondering if you'd give us your opinion on how everything looks. Thanks so much in advance. x
I’m assuming you meant an actual opinion? If not I’ll take it down but it should cover whatever you are looking for! ( @talenthunthq )
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First Impression: First impression… the icon alone gives a very glamorous feel and that feeds well into Hollywood so I think that’s a good first impression.Your preview theme follows this theme and definitely makes it feel more Hollywood than I think any icon can portray without actually being the Hollywood sign so seems great for what you’re going for so far!
Homepage: Box themes are a big no for groups for me. You have so much more space you could be using. The text is tiny, I can hardly read it and have to zoom in to do so comfortably. You are using about 1/20 of the space you could be using for actual information and showing off your group. If you were buying an advertisement you wouldn’t buy a page and just a 1x1 square box would you? No, of course not. I would recommend changing your theme. Keep the style of the graphics and such those are very nicely done. But the theme itself would have made me turn away if I was a person searching for a group like this. Also the images as links is a bit confusion and it’s much easier to use themes with links. Also the pop up boxes are not accessible to anyone on mobile and sometimes with a slow connection. Not necessarily a deal breaker on them since you don’t have a lot of info there, but something to keep in mind.
Plot: Your plot… Your plot is great!! It’s well written, and seems like it’ll be interesting for people to play out! I don’t have much else to say about this other than maybe make links a different color because white on a light background isn’t easy to read. Why does only one brother have a page about him though?
Characters: So normally I’d use this to comment on the bio … but I’ll use it to go over the skeleton and lay out you have. First off, I know as someone who’s been on mobile for a year now and only just got a slow internet connection this page would be hell for anyone browsing on mobile. I find it best to be accommodating to as many as you can, so perhaps consider that. Also more boxes. Even tinier boxes. I can’t say I understand the appeal, I would opt for a normal skeleton laid out like a mini bio or something like that. The info is fairly basic so nothing to really add there…
Overall: Normally these aren’t my types of RP, I tend to lean towards a music based one if I’m gonna go the fame and fortune route but people LOVE RPs likes yours and you have a fantastic start and the content is great. I would just consider people who may not have great eye sight and maybe think about making it a little bit more user friendly? I’d say 7/10, and most points off are really just the theme. The content is great though and that’s the part that really matters, in my opinion. Though, first impressions are important. I truly wish you the best of luck!