HAPPY 400 FOLLOWERS!!! To honor this momentous occasion I finally bring you:
(small trigger warning for throwing up oil)
(Chapter 2) <- (your here!) -> (Chapter 4)
Its absolutely insane that I hit 400 followers!!! I've only been on tumblr for 2 years and the fact that my work has resonated with people is so special to me, thank you all for getting me to this point and I really hope this comic is good enough for all of you.
This chapter took like a month and a half to finish and has been one of the most ambitious and difficult undertakings I've ever done, this is the longest comic I've ever made, has the most unique perspective shots (those top down ones were really tricky to figure out), the most characters (like 8), the most locations (like 5), the most panels, and the most action of any comic I've ever made. To think I had only made one fully rendered 6 page comic before this endeavor over a year ago is crazy to me, I really think that just looking at the first chapter compared to this one, its such a major improvement. I'm proud of how far I've come.
Look I am very tired after this, I apologize but the comic will be going on hiatus after this chapter, I need a break to work on some other project (another md au) so keep an eye out for that!
now for the actual notes for this comic: Uzi did not realize Doll was in her head due to Doll going out of her way to cover her tracks. The weird cyn camera thing is actually cyn! Not sure if I made that clear enough but it was taking advantage of Uzi's confused state to get her to release it and Doll from her body, that thing Uzi coughed up was the thing she ate in the finale to take over as the primary host. Reminder that the teacher is Lizzy's dad in this story, he also gave her the largest room in the house. N was left sleeping in Uzi's room in chapter 2. Lizzy and V are a pair in this (woooo go my Vizzy!!). In chapter 2 Doll mentioned that she needed a new core for her body (opposite problem of nori), that weird shadow thing her body is transformed into is still lacking a proper core but the solver was able to use it's powers to reanimate her corpse, Doll has very little control over it (and yes it's supposed to be that shadow Doll from the credits).
And finally I'll bring up a few of my major criticisms: I had to simplify a lot of the designs to speed up the process, some of the perspective shots look pretty off, the scaling gets inconsistent at times, the last page is kinda rushed and is 2 pages shoved together, theres a noticeable shift in lineart thickness after page 3 I wish was more seemless, and I wish I got a scene in with Lizzy saying she missed Doll.
That's all I've got to say, enjoy, have a happy new year, and once again thank you!
