We have the same theme, that's fricking awesome. For a while this theme was massively overused but then the hype died down I guess, I still love it so I'm glad you're using it. The graphics look good, and so does the colour scheme but I'm honestly missing the PNG, the theme really doesn't look as pretty without it. Bless you. Honestly the plot isn't anything I've never seen but you managed to write a long, detailed and lovely plot, honestly you get brownie points. I'd change 'naviguide' to navigate or guide because the combination of those two words has always looked off to me, it's just something that I wouldn't go for. I love the FCs you've picked, you just have to change 'closet to' to 'closest to."