Hello!
So I read your fanfic and I must say I'm obsessed! I definitely LOVE Vee and her POVs; every part of the story that takes place in the Autumn Court is very interesting to me.
I don't know if you accept criticism, and I also hope this doesn't seem offensive. I don't write English well enough for what I want to say to make sense.
Before reading the most recent chapter, I was really upset with the last few chapters (16/17) because everything seemed so "loose"—that's not quite the word, but I can't think of another—like there was too much going on and nothing happening at the same time, you know? There were events there, but it felt like the story wasn't moving along (like it was just going in circles without really having any purpose). It felt weird because the rest of the story wasn't that way, and the most recent update wasn't either. I don't know if something personal happened or if that was really the intention, but I think it would be positive for the story if you paid attention to this point. It's a very good story and it's a great break in "contrast" when something like that happens in the middle.
Nah you're not wrong. I'd been slammed with work during those chapters and just needed to write "something" to get an update out there. I get what you're saying and I appreciate the constructive feedback. That said, believe it or not, there are key points in chapters 16/17 that do come up again and have more serious implications. But I do acknowledge that everything around those pieces of information was more lazily thrown together.
