oh look at that, a comic panel I spent way too much time on today
Thoughts/ramblings and bts pics under the cut!
This is likely going to end up being the title page of the treilyn comic but I need to design a title I actually like... I've also been using a new brush and I really enjoy the kind of sketchy/pencil look it gives! With this being the title page, I'll also need to rework some of my panels and try and condense the storyline I do have into a slightly smaller one that is a little more manageable than the one I have now. The rest of the comic will mostly likely be grayscale with a little less detail than this page and will only have color as a way to provide emphasis on certain details.
Here's what I have so far of the first 6 panels! I completely forgot the take out the sketch for the top middle panel so uh. yeah. There's also a workshop/placeholder title design that I thought looked good in my head but just isn't doing it for me on the panel itself. Any suggestions would be great!
I'm also thinking of doing a bit of a workshop in my notebook to better develop some of the plot I want to flesh out. And the repetition that I want to include to emphasize Treilyn's discomfort before he comes out can be one panel with different dates/positions/expressions etc rather than two-four full repeating panels. I can also try and fit make some panels kind of small or figure out how to make different sized panels to accommodate bigger scenes and/or dialogue (like the spock-treilyn chess talk where treilyn asks if it's logical to feel like he doesn't fit in his body and how he wishes he could change it to better reflect his perception of himself).