Hello!! I am writing a muslim character for my psychological horror visual novel Trustfallen. I personally am white and non muslim, so i am asking for help from muslims to avoid accidentally writing an offensive or hurtful character, and just generally hopefully learning better how to write her. I have done and am consistently doing research, but would like to know if there are any general things to avoid in her writing or anything i should try to implement. I also have a question that i have spent hours trying to find an answer on, but everything is giving me different responses, is music considered haram? The majority of articles say yes, but when looking at threads and posts from muslims they say no. Also below the line is the sketch of her design along with some basic character informaton, please tell me if anything is wrong, offensive or needs to be fixed. I am trying my best to show diversity while not being offensive or poorly portraying characters.
This is one of the three main protagonists in Trustfallen, her name is Asmira, she is 17 and Pakistani, as well as lesbian.










