An Archive of Our Own, a project of the Organization for Transformative Works
Author: defcontwo
Rating: Teen and up
Length: 2,487 words
Type: Past
Pairing: Jack/Parse
Summary: The sales pitch is irrelevant: this moment right here, sitting in the front of Kent’s piece of shit pickup truck, listening to “Party in the USA” on the radio at top volume -- that’s all the convincing Jack ever needed.
Or: Kent and Jack, a carnival, and the last gasp of the 34 days.
Commentary: I’m... sad. That’s the word I have to describe it. It’s not exactly angst I’d say (even though I’m going to tag it as such for archive purposes and because it’s the most apropiate category we have), it’s not wallowing... but we have a happy setting (a carnival) in contrast with a Jack constantly wanting to reach for his pills, we have the constant reminder of the approaching draft. We know that what Jack and Parse have is going to end, and we know it’s not going to be pretty. So this was deeply sad.
However, it was beautifully written. English is failing me right now to say how I felt during the last part, when I read about the pictures in the photobooth. The last sentence made me gasp.
So, yes, enjoyable pain. Who can say no to that?











