Hi there, this is the Anon who asked about the Story that wouldnāt develop past the āGrab the readers attentionā I needed more space to put everything down, so I hope you donāt mind Iām submiting instead of doing another Anon, I donāt like spamming like 3 or 4 asks at once.
If you have any advice for me Iād love it, and take it gratefully!!! Thanks!ā Ukaia
Thomas Sanders was a famous YouTuber. He sang, he did skits and he did live performances. He was famous, but not snooty or rude. And his fans loved him for it.
Thomas Sanders was a lonely man. He had one friend that he never got to see, even though they shared a home. He could only leave notes for and do little acts of kindness like setting up the coffee for the next day.
Thomas Sanders was a man on the run. Wanted for crimes he didnāt commit, hunted down every day of his life. He could only hope that one day he could escape.
Thomas Sanders was an every day man. Nobody knew his name, nobody recognized him in the street. He could blend in and vanish in a group of two, and thatās how he liked it.
Thomas Sanders is a man.. who does not exist.
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So thatās the idea thatās swimming around my head. Basically I saw a post on tumblr that kind of inspired it
Each Person is a different Side. Anxiety, uses Thomas as his persona for YouTube and such.
Morality Uses Thomas to hide from the law
Logic Uses Thomas to help with his crippling isolation ( I was thinking heās a āfirstā on a mars base or something like that and despite not wanting human contact he needs it and it kind of develops, that was inspired by Thomasās vid where heād recorded a note to himself as patton to help his editing time))
And Creativity is a famous person who canāt go anywhere with out being mobbed, and he longs just for some down time, and thus comes up with Thomas the very day person whoās a nobody so he can just.. breath.
What do you think? Any good? Do you have any suggestions for me please? Iād love the help. Thanks!!!
Ohmygosh! Looks FanTASITC. I love the concept and Iām curious as to how theyāre all doing that & if/how they meet (or at least discover the existence of each other)? Are they all gonna look the same/like Thomas? I wonder how theyād each react to being discovered, or how they go out of their way to avoid it. Or, when they decided to create their Thomas persona?!
And Looogaaan. I just wanna HUG him. I do hope he gets some genuine human contact soooooon. Thatās likeā¦. Necessary. Oh, Goodness! Pat!! Whatās HAPPENED there?! Iām very curious to how he got into that situation.
Looks like a wonderful premise! I just suggest you ask yourself some questions about world-building (are they even in the same world/time/region? How do the stories connect-if they do at all beyond Thomas Sanders?), backstory, and maybe play with a few possible plot points and possible bumps in the road to how things work out! Good luck on your writing endeavors, Iād love to see how you develop it!!