In today's exercise we push past metaphors into word-mutations, stealing old text and reanimating it for your zombie horde. Great writers steal, legendary writers necromance. Please buy my novel, The
So I found out my story title for current fandom project (based on an in-Universe book) is wrong due to a mistranslation from a while back and I don’t know what to do - keep or change - considering I’ve nabbed all the social media accounts and people have recc’d it under this wrong name etc :c. Sadfaaaace.
Going with Adam’s Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy! :) <3.
“Far out in the uncharted backwaters of the unfashionable end of the western spiral arm of the Galaxy lies a small unregarded yellow sun.”
1) This is a good sentence for this
2) This is where my lack of basic understanding of grammar just falls apart.
“[Relative location] in the [verbed] [noun] of the [adjective] [noun] of the [adjective] [noun] of [noun] (,) [verbs] a [adjective] [verbed] [adjective] [noun].”
BONUS can you put back in the uns?
Nearby in the dilapidated cave of the underground wizards of the highest order of pottery, hides a old bearded naked woman.
(Sorry that was awful just needed one to get out of system)
In a distant land, in the smokey heights of the rumbly volcano of the impatient Gods of War screams a [x] bounded human sacrifice.
In sleep, in the unreachable depths of the unknowable mind of an Oxford professor of psychology percolates a [x] uncovered sparking idea. (blah I tried but we’re on a tight deadline, also ‘uncovered’ is opposite to other uns there, anyway)
Parallel to us, in the mirror world of the metal demons of the red asopdkfapsodkfpaoskdfpoaskdfpokas
THAT WAS REALLY HARD THERE WERE TOO MANY WORDS TO REPLACE LOL
The un thing is a good idea (not un specifically but emphasising how little the sun is thought of with the repetition), I can see what he was going for and I only noticed it when breaking the sentence down :)
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