I haven't really done script comparison in a while mainly bc I've been doing nothing but leeching off others' playthroughs, but making a face at the script direction for Meiyo's lament.
Through the script direction I have, it should have been something more raw
"As Meiyo examines his own filthiness to light in this conversation, he is exasperated in his misery. He can no longer stay quiet in this situation. All he has is an explosion of lament."
Meiyo: My facial hair is growing in...In the end, I really am my father's son...
Meiyo: Dammit all!...How can it be so suffocating, all while wanting to live?...
Meiyo: I might as well be one with my beloved Yuri. Beautiful, flawless, and precious. That's what I should have been, and yet!!...
Meiyo: I'm nothing but a walking pile of FILTH! Whereas YOU!
Meiyo: The exquisite specimen you are, the one whom I placed my love and being into, drive me to envy!
Meiyo: It hurts so much I'd rather DIE!!