#whumpy writing

[hold-him-down]

y'all. GUYS. LADIES. FOLKS.

the sunshine court is 100% to our tastes over here on my side of whumblr and i simply CANNOT BELIEVE this woman took every whump trope i love and published a whole ass book with them I can't think of a single chapter that wasn't DIRECTLY TO MY TASTE including, but not limited to (with spoilers under the cut):

being so upset he pukes? twice?

noncon drugging

medical drugging/chemical restraints

noncon

whumpee thinking the caretaker is the new whumper

whumpee thinking everyone is the whumper

self deprication

tears

broken bones

whumpers gettin' THEIRs dammit

exhaustion

waterboarding

scars

isolation

i stg i could go on forever

THE FOUND FAMILY OF IT ALL

THE LEARNING TO BE LOVED OF IT ALL

i can't. i'm gonna give the first three a proper reread (which isn't explicitly necessary to read this but you will be confused to all hell if you go in blind, but you could probably get by), and then read this bad boy again. and again probably, so if you don't see me for the next month you can assume i'm doing this.

[whumpyinside]

Here’s a list of my favorite whumpy verbs(?):

-flinched

-gasped

-shook

-froze

-recoiled

-winched

-shrank

-shivered

-screamed

-whimpered

-sobbed

-tensed

-groaned

-shrieked

-jerked

-choked

-begged

They almost instantly bring some sort of whumpy imagine to my mind.

🤭🤭🤭

(Featuring my favorite gif)

[killian-whump]

Whumpy Writing #1

Me: *writing whumpy fanfic*

Me: *gets to the end of the whump*

Me: *loses interest entirely*

Me: But it needs an ending...

Me: *scribbles "The End" on it*

Me: It's beautiful.

[killian-whump]

Whumpy Writing #2

Me: *writing whumpy story*

Me: Hmm.

Me: I'm not sure a human could survive all of this.

Me: *considers scaling back some of the whump*

Me: No, that won't do.

Me: *scribbles "superhuman" in character introduction*

Me: Problem SOLVED.

[agonyalley]

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