Again congrats on the 500 followers!
💎 - just because i want to talk to you about "Stay"
First and foremost, I must say I can't comment much about your writing skill in terms of the use of "pretty words" and all, because i myself is new at writing. so i'm not nearly qualified to judge but!! What i can comment on is how you make feel throughout the fic. With that said, I will be needing you to compensate me because a heart has been broken. You have triggered the melancholy side of me and damn does it shatter my heart to pieces. I love me some one-sided love angst; I mean I always like reading how unrequited love is written. Like, the pain, the longing, the joy that laced with doubt, everything about it. And the way wrote it!! Just muahh *chef's kiss*. Now the three things I always love in my stories (whether in reading ot writing) are angst, fluff and smut. And the fact that you have these is also another reason why i love it!! I don't know what else to say so why not we go through some reaction that you pulled out of me.
Here's some real reaction that went through when reading this fic:
Your warning of "out of character bucky"
oh please, emotional or not, we love him regardless. Tbh it is nice to see diverse characteristic from bucky, like he does in this fic. It expand my imagination to interesting possibilities 💫
You immediately choked on the cereal, the milk going down the wrong pipe making your face turn a deep red.
The whole scene was fucking relatable i would spil everything in my mouth if i saw him like that too 😩🤌🏼
"..the moment you stepped off that elevator the first time, my heart was yours. It chose you, James. You."
The imagery in my head was too beautiful that I fell in love with bucky... again!
By the time you were finished, tears were sliding down your cheeks onto the paper. You took a deep shaky breath and tried to stifle your sobs.
This. This pain. Yup. This is what why I love reading unrequited angst 🥀
"I ruin everything I fuckin' touch…"
You can ruin me any time baby. Sorry, sorry. I was trying to distract myself from the pain 😭
His voice was firm, and it eerily resembled the tone he had when he was the Winter Soldier all those years ago.
Oooofff chills down my spine yall. Like imagine his eyes went void for just a split second there, so fast that Steve didn't manage to notice. Damn.
"A woman named Y/N Barnes was life-lined here. I need to see her."
*Gasped loudly* Excuse mee??? Am i your wife now?? When did we get married and how come I forgot??
Wait. Wait. WAIT!! I am??!!! Omg am i married??!! To you?? (Not me talking to bucky as if he can hear me)
"Alright, I gotta ask… since… uh… when did Y/N become your wife, mate?"
EXACTLYYYYY. THANK YOU FOR ASKING!
"I w-was always scared. Scared to let you in, because I didn't want to hurt you. I didn't want him to take you from me"
I'd do anything to have the soldat's cameo. Even if its just an allusion of him.
He would tell you stories from the ‘40s and at night Bucky would read to you.
I am a simple girl. I just want bucky to tell me stories of his past and read to me in my sleep. I'll die happy. 🤧
Then you woke up to Bucky and wait,… husband?!
*gasped in shock* we really don't know when we got married do we?
"I lied and said you were my wife so they'd let me see you."
God he is so dramatic and i love him so much 😭💞
"You like that, doll? Do you like when I kiss you here? Gonna mark your pretty skin so everyone knows you're mine."
Can't comment much on the smut because it was amazing I just forgot to jot down my reaction.
You kissed the tip of his nose and rested your head on his chest so you could hear his heartbeat.
I love soft kisses in fics. Giving or receiving. Please i just want to pamper every part of his face and body with all of my kisses.
Urghhh such a classic line yet as powerful as ever.
So that conclude my long-ass ranting 😂
And just so you know, I have gone through all your bucky fics. I will properly reblog them when I have the time. With that said, I want to give special shoutout to another fic you wrote call "Unexpected Saviour" because it was so cute, I love Cadence so much; I want to blow raspberry against her cheeks.
Anyway, thank you for writing such amazing works, I enjoyed my time reading them. And I hope you will enjoy mine as well! Looking forward to hear from you soon! Until then, I'm sending virtual kisses and hugs!
PLEASE I AM SOBBING AT WORK, I- 🥺🥺🥺❤️❤️❤️
I can't even begin to explain to you how much this means to me. The amount of detail, research, tears, and dedication I put into Stay is monumental.
But this? This breakdown and detail of how you reacted? This blew me away and I cannot even tell you how happy this made me.
Unexpected Savior is actually about my daughter. She is in love with Bucky and has been since she was very young. She's almost 12 now, but I know for a fact that if Bucky was real and that scenario happened in real life she would do that. She'd defend him just like little Cadence did. (Cadence is actually her middle name 😅). And because I can't pass up an opportunity to gush about how cute my baby girl is, she wanted to propose to Sebastian for her birthday last year and I actually took her to meet him at New York comic con last October. She proposed, he said yes, and I recorded the autograph session. You can watch that video here. ❤️
But back to you, you amazing, beautiful, talented, sweetheart... I just... I'm speechless. I...I love you and I...I just...thank you. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for supporting me and reblogging my stuff and participating in my writing challenge and just...thank you for everything. 🥺❤️
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