What got wrong with "who made me a princess" storytelling👀
Guys who made me princess ended and... I will be honest I'm kind of deluded about the whole final arc, I'm happy that Athy found herself yet there are many story telling points not well addressed. I'll explain everything well in the next few weeks about what's wrong (not in the story per se (but about the gestion(wich I reconize is not simple to manage🙌🏼) I don't want to make flames, but explain about common (expecially in mahwa) errors about the "story telling" (by this term I means the timing, the space you give to certain characters, the development of a character or a situation) all of this is difficult to manage, so I want to make a proper post where I explain well those things, and I wanted to let you guys know I'll make this "analysis" post (since I know that thebpists you like more in my blog are about characters, stories and adaptation analysis) and since I sudied "storytelling" (bc yes based on what we are going to write there are some "steps" we need to follow and be attentive to be coherent with those, to make the srory the smother we can.
Disclainer, I won't, like always "rate" the manga nor using numbers nor stars, the author, I'm sure gave is all to make it, and I don't want to be judgingimental, I want to make analysis that are costructive and definetly don't insults the hardwork of the authors( I always followed Spoon and from what he got from the fandom I can imagine how it must have been difficult to make choices and to change the story from the novel to avoid the "toxics" parts, and give us a happy ending.
So🙌🏼 If you might be interested in this(this is the first time I make this kind of analysis here) stay tuned and if you are not following ,follow to see the post incaming.
Thank you for all the support🙏🏼 I'm looking forward to make this analysis.