I love how affected Agatha is in the trailer. Reader is affected in such an obvious way, and she's a complete mess, but Agatha is still maintaining her unshakeable persona, even if she's nervous and playing with her ring as she talks to her. And I love how Rio knows her wife so well—she knows what details to look for, how loving Agatha really is, even if she's so subtle about it.
And Agatha looks like a person who doesn't change her mind. That, once she makes a decision, that's it—it's final, and there are no exceptions. But when Reader asks nicely and insists (she doesn't even have to beg, as much as Agatha would enjoy that) before she gives in like she did at the pool.
And I like how hesitant Agatha seems to initiate contact. I don't know if that was your intention, but it always seems like she thinks hard before making a move, no matter how small or large. And Reader always reacts the perfect way, and I feel like that affects her so much that she has to turn to her wife to help her settle how affected (horny) she is.
Anyway, I didn't mean to make this so long, it's just that I love all the subtle details you add, especially about Agatha. You never disappoint me with each chapter that you write. Somehow, it's like it gets better and better over time.
Sorry for the rant lmao. Keep up the good work 💜💚
Hi sweetie!! Hope you're well!!
I love your rant and I want to read it more times.
I love how Agatha has so many layers. I see a lot of writers creating a tough, complex Rio, but I think Agatha is the real deal here.
And yes, that was totally the intention!!! LOL Agatha is always in doubt because she values choosing rational paths and she knows that this relationship with R is anything but rational.
There are things that you still don't know, that will be revealed in time. But it's clear as day that women still have control of the situation and I don't want that. I want everyone to go crazy, all lost in this feeling.
To do this, we need R to have a little more courage, a little more honesty with herself. Which is difficult because R has had a difficult life and has fragile pride, just like Agatha...
In short, what I mean is, R and Agatha are similar in many ways and this will bring them closer together. That's why she is affected, that's why she cares and that's why she wants you.
I really love your rant, I love to read all the things you guys have to say to me! Do it more times, please! Haha
Definitely, write me more ✨
