Sometimes the Problem Isn’t the Story — It’s the Distance
After spending so much time with a manuscript, it becomes difficult to tell what’s clear on the page and what only makes sense in your head.
That distance between writer knowledge and reader experience can affect pacing, emotional impact, and clarity more than most authors realize.
That’s why beta reading matters.
I read manuscripts from a reader’s perspective, paying attention to engagement, character connection, scene flow, and the moments where readers may pause, disconnect, or want more. You’ll receive thoughtful feedback that helps you understand how your story is actually being experienced.
Not just whether the story works — but how it works.
If you’re revising a draft and want a clearer outside perspective, feel free to reach out. I’d be happy to help.
What part of your manuscript do you keep second-guessing?