Spoilers for WTNV Ep 250: Father Kevin
I finally got up to Kevin's "redemption arc and... I didn't really like it...
I'm not sure if thats a surprise or anything, but to me it felt both a little behind the scenes and unnecessary.
Don't get me wrong, I LOVED the Mother Lauren stuff and everything up to ep 250. I felt like things were going along and Kevin saying something like "my teeth are my weapon" was real funny and in character. I loved when Mother Lauren basically told Kevin his god hated him (my favorite trope ❤️, give me more being so devoted you kill for your god and then they fucking hate you).
I liked the episodes, I understood the idea they were going for with older Kevin serving as the father he needed to young Kevin. There were definitely the starts of his shift in personality over time and interweaving Cecils issues with his father in makes a lot of sense. I understand that for Kevin, he's lived like a century to develop and change his ways on his own.
But... I was still very confused during ep 250. Kevins lines didn't really make sense and it felt almost jarring to go from "Cecil thinks Kevin wanted Night Vale to fall" to "look at Kevin be a not terrible person and parent this kid that is also him". We as the listeners needed to spend more time with Kevin and his change in character. Without us viewing that gradual change, it feels very out of place.
Part of this is 100% the fact I didn't feel Kevin needed a redemption arc. He's a bad person, he's done irredeemable things. The creators completely forgetting Charles and Donovan make this feel even more out of place. The whole season feels like it was written because the fans love Kevin and wanted more of him, not because he needed it nor deserved it. I personally think a continuation of Kevin should continue to have the really complex (bad) relationships the writers have given him. No they aren't healthy, but it makes him such an interesting character. And like, they were building it up too? It was going really well. I think they were running out of episodes to finish up his arc and should have instead taken another season to do it or give him a book, or have Kevin R Free voice more of his lines. I no joke think Cecil narrating over most of it made it weird... there was an awful lot of Kevin talking done by Cecil when Kevin has an established VA that clearly still works with Night Vale Presents.
Overall, strange choices all around are probably what made this not hit for me. Maybe I'll do a rewrite of it one day (would really just take like writing between ep 244-250 to flesh everything out more).