Twilight fanfiction
Tumblr URL: shegoesby-ann Fandom: Twilight Language: English Genre: Romance/ Fantasy Pairing(s) (if any): Edward/Bella Rating : T (light cussing) Warnings: none Completed: no Current length: 19 000 (6 chapters) Predicted end length: 15-20 chapters Title: to be determined Bio: A twilight rewrite that deviates from canon. The vampires are more true to original lore. The sunlight doesn’t burn them, but it reveals their true appearance- grey skin, black eyes, dark circles fangs. Bella is more fleshed out and is initially scared of him and wants to stay away from Edward, when she finds out what he is. What you wish the beta reader to help you with: Plot, any grammar you find that doesn’t work. I’m trying to add a slight horror element to Twilight, while staying somewhat true to the original. I’d also like to develop their feelings for each other so that it feels more natural and has more of a build up. I’ve got a lot of ideas but I’m not sure how to make them work, or what ones I should just scrap. Link: not posted yet