#yhs fic

[scarlettstaar]

Sill y milly and kitty kitty, and no good grian

https://archiveofourown.org/works/78360966

You guys can read my fic as wellll ayyeee??? Ayeee???

[mrparable]

obligatory i don’t ship the real content creators, they were canonically dating, ect ect

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“just-” grian hesitated, “taurtis,” he whispered.

“yeah?” he turned his head, slipping down his headphones to hear grian clearer, “what’s up?” 

grian shifted his weight, the couch creaking and groaning with the movement. his face was flushed red, angled away from taurtis. his fingers twisted the fabric of his hoodie nervously, one hand wrapped around his knee as he curled up around himself.

“i- um,” he licked his chapped lips nervously, “taurtis i really-” he cut himself off.

“hey, you good?” taurtis leaned over, eyebrows furrowing as he placed a hand on grian’s shoulder, wincing at the way grian flinched.

grian lifted his head, staring at taurtis with wide eyes as he blushed more. “uh, i’ve just- we’ve been friends for a really long time and i was-” his eyes flicked away from taurtis, as he slowly put his hand over taurtis’s. his expression was pinched, almost ashamed.

“i was wondering if you wanted to like,” he shrugged off taurtis’s hand, breathing unsteadily, “i don’t know, go out sometime?” he whispered, almost praying taurtis wouldn’t hear him.

“oh,” taurtis blinked, fingers twitching. his eyes widened, “oh,” he whispered.

grian shifted, picking at the hem of his sweater.

“oh, oh my- yes, yes!” he nodded excitedly, “of course, of course, dude!”

“oh,” grian blinked dumly, hand pausing as he swallowed thickly,, “well alright-, then we should probably figure out a-”

his words were cut off as taurtis grabbed his face gently, very slowly leaning closer. grian’s eyes widened, he could lean back, push taurtis back, it’s not like it would be difficult.

he didn’t, though. it was just a- curiosity as to what would happen, that’s- he isn’t-

their lips connected, and for a split second, it was like they were the only ones that existed. the world felt just a little bit smaller, confined to the small space of their living room. as if expectations didn’t matter, grades- parents- teachers.

the world was them and only them, for a split second.

taurtis pulled back, both breathing heavily. grian blinked repeatedly, placing a hand over his hammering heart.

mutely, he grabbed taurtis’s hand and intertwined them, shifting himself under the crook of taurtis’ neck. taurtis wrapped an arm around him, pulling him closer.

“we aren’t telling sam, are we?” he asked, eyes fluttering closed.

“mm,” taurtis hummed with indecision, absentmindedly tracing nonsensical patterns into grian’s hoodie, “nope.”

grian snickered despite himself, “good,” he whispered, nodding, “good.”

“we should- i don’t know, go to a walmart parking lot as our first date,” he suggested, smiling as grian smacked his shoulder playfully.

“a walmart parking lot?” he asked incredulously, laughter mixing into his voice, “i swear- if that’s really our first date- i’m not sure what i’ll do but it’ll be shi- awful. it’ll be the worst thing ever.”

“what? breaking up with me?” he rolled his eyes, “okay, fine, mister rich boy, what do you suggest then?”

grian smiled, squeezing taurtis’ hand. “i don’t know- somewhere better then walmart, i’m not sure, maybe we’ll like- fly out somewhere, that could be cool.”

taurtis giggled, “mm, that seems a bit pricy for a first date of all things.”

“oh, oh you’re right. we should definitely dumpster dive.”

“exactly, you get me.”

grian laughed.

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originally i wasnt big on their ship, but it kinda grew on me honestly. also im aroace as fuck and that kiss scene was based solely off what i read from other fics, sorry folks

i attempted to get their voices correct and this was my first time writing them dont be mean okay thanks for reading have a nice day byeee

[scarlettstaar]

Bullshit lmao

[scarlettstaar]

Do you plan on majorly changing anything with the main Yandere mystery? Like, in a sense of subverting the expectations?

I ask cuz going into reading a rewrite, the audience would assume Yuki is behind the murders already, should you still treat it as a mystery. This isn't a bad thing, there's a lot of room for more storytelling that way, I'm just curious as to how you plan to go about it.

Unless you don't wanna spoil anything in that aspect of the story lol

Hell0 sorry I didn't see this till like right now , IM SORRY !!! sad emoji

I do enjoy YHS' mystery, I want to build up some of the original aspects. I hope people go into my rewrite with everything they know thrown away, only because it's a REWRITE not a RETELLING. Like JStar and Gareth don't have a relationship, JStar makes a joke about Gareth's death Infront of the body! heheh

I want my rewrite to be darker, disturbing.

HERE A REDESGIN OF SOOKIE THAT I HATE

After READ MORE are spoilers for my rewrite for sookies character

Sookie kills herself, which is canon. I want to expand on it, and make it more twisted/more ugly.

Her story (for my rewrite) is that she is quiet and passionate, she spends her days reading and spending time with people she is comfortable with.

She discovered that the city is going to put more chemicals in the creeks, lakes, and any body of water. shocked emoji! She advocates against the city, but fails terribly. very bad lmao. A realisation sets in, she isn't a threat, she drowns herself to be reborn as a sea monster. She scares off workers and companies.

[scarlettstaar]

HELLLO GUYS

Can you guys give me questions aboutt my yhs rewrite

Im rewriting the storyline, thats why im taking a long time posting the next chapter ma bad

With each question, Ill be redrawing a random character from the rewrite like shown below. (And coloured !)

[scarlettstaar]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/78360966

I rewriting my shitty yhs fic, its a bit better now

[darkaviarymc]

I need to stop making new WIPs when I already have half a dozen. Anyway, this might be a thing, it might not be. Have a Griellen YHS thing.

"Is there anything you want more than anything in the world?

Grian looked up from the algebra textbook in his lap.  His datemate Ellen sat cross-legged on the floor in front of him.  Though they'd spoken to him, they hadn't looked up from the book on crossroads magic they were reading.

"Is there what now?"

Ellen laughed.  "Do you have a hearts desire? One thing you want with your entire being that you'd do anything for?"

"I'd really just like to pass my exam tomorrow," Grian answered with a soft chuckle.  "If my maths grade drops any lower, I'll be disqualified from the exchange program and be sent home."

Ellen hummed thoughtfully and only then looked up from their book.  "So your hearts desire is to stay here in Japan?"

Grian sighed and closed his textbook.  "Honesty, I don't know any more.  I thought being here, going out on my own, and making new friends would be a good thing.  But with everything that's happened, all the trouble Sam's dragged me into... I don't know any more."

"Were you not happy in England?  Your adopted family sounds really nice."

"I was happy!  I love them, and Pearl isn't just my sister, she's my best friend.  But as good as they are to me, I just feel... out of place?  Like, they talk about Australia like it's home to them, but I've never even been.  We don't look alike, we don't sound alike, we're not even the same hybrid species.  I'm a bower bird, and they're hawk moths."

"And you though you'd fit in better in a completely different country where you barely speak the language?" Ellen asked with a teasing smile. 

"I don't need to fit in really, I just... want to find my own way.  But with the chokehold Sam has on my life, I don't think that's going to happen."

"So..." Ellen said slowly.  "You're hearts desire is... to be free?"

Grian though for a moment, staring down at the cover of his textbook.  "I think," he answered, "I just want to know where I belong."