first & last passage tag! tagged by @yinxiong
pick a passage from the first fic you posted on here + your most recent one, and compare how much your writing has changed!
i *think* cigarettes (yuta) was one of the first if not the first nct fic i posted on here but here goes:
The bitingly acrid smell of smoke reaches you before his words do, and his hand finds its place in the dip of your waist before he comes into full view, coming up from behind you. He glances down at you, probably to give you a reassuring smile. You don’t chance a look, however; instead, you look away faux casually at his first inclination of movement. You’ve been in this position for hours while waiting for your boyfriend to return home. You know how the night will end, but you’re hoping, praying, that everything will play out differently than what you believe will happen.
His eyes burn holes into the back of your neck as you slip out of his grasp and shrug off your jacket - his jacket - and place it haphazardly in the fading orange plastic chair, the only one on the balcony. Yuta’s holding his breath, though he isn’t fully aware of it. It’s only when you slide open the door of his apartment that he reaches out and grabs your wrist. His slender fingers are cool and you’re too aware of your pulse as you finally turn and look at him.
“Smoking kills, you know that, right?”
here’s some words from my most recently worked on wip, fool’s gold (greaser jeno)/smut warning:
“You’re the one who wanted to be fingered in the passenger seat of Johnny Suh’s car, filthy girl,” Jeno throws back, not surprised when Jess swats at his arm at the mention of her boyfriend. She loves Johnny, Jeno knows she does, but that doesn’t stop her from begging for Jeno’s fingers or tongue or, if she’s got time, his dick, whenever she stops by the City Motors garage that Jeno’s been employed at for the past two months. She always comes in driving Johnny’s red Chevy Bel Air convertible. He knows it’s bad of her and bad for him, especially if Johnny ever gets wind of it, but he can’t find it in himself to stop, not when it’s free spank bank material.
Jeno’s probably a bad person for it. He doesn’t really care - after all, it’s just sex. If emotions were involved - and they never are, not for Jeno, not when it comes to getting his dick wet - it might be a different story. That, and it’s Johnny Suh’s girl.
Jeno fucking hates Johnny Suh.
“Say, speaking of John,” Jess says, seemingly sufficiently cooled down by now. “I keep meaning to and forgetting to ask - you’re the same age as his sister, aren’t you?”
“(Name)?” Jeno asks, his brow furrowing when he gets a nod of confirmation. “Yeah, I mean, we were in the same homeroom and shit this past year. Why?”
“Just curious.”
i’m gonna tag @neocitybynight @neostruck @jensungf @longassride @waithyuck @ja3minz !!
